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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2006 13:39:35 GMT -5
There was a long silence, where they looked at eachother, before it was broken by Ryan. "What on earth just happened" he asked weakly.
Cara looked on the verge of tears when she answered, "you went crazy", she took a deep breath, biting back her fear. She went to continue but she couldn't do it. Steven swallowed his fear and continued.
"You...you almost destroyed that creature, you sort of glowed, and then....and then you just, EXPLODED".
Ryan took a step forward, reaching out for his friends, but they all stepped away, there faces full of fear.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2006 13:43:49 GMT -5
heh looks good so far
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2006 13:46:53 GMT -5
"You can't be serious" replied Ryan, a worried look on his face. Steven nodded, not able to talk. Ryan looked at the others for him, but he didn't get any. "But, but I was back in the real world, and I was some sort of ghost, but then I saw Cara, and, and...." he trailed off. "And then I was back here".
The group still looked scared, and most of them thought he was crazy.
"Ryan, is that true" James asked, a thoughtful look on his face, Ryan nodded. "Well, perhaps your mind returned to the real world, our world, when your real body stayed here, and created wh...." James trailed off too, realising he hadn't quite figured it out.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2006 13:50:39 GMT -5
yay i'm beign thoguhful.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2006 13:51:11 GMT -5
amazing ^_^
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2006 15:20:53 GMT -5
and veen more suprsiign i actually spoke.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2006 11:50:24 GMT -5
I'm just scared! lol Great story NM!  Keep it coming! |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2006 12:07:18 GMT -5
Yeah I just need to come up with a few more idea's and then I'll post some more
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2006 12:13:20 GMT -5
Gdgd be quick with it!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2006 11:18:56 GMT -5
yeh u better be.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2006 13:25:31 GMT -5
ok Saturday at the latest
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2006 13:28:38 GMT -5
it better be or i'll poke you till you fly.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2006 3:48:28 GMT -5
I'll do it sometime today, seeing as I'm going out soon.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2006 6:58:06 GMT -5
you ebtter do
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2006 12:50:16 GMT -5
"Go on" Ryan urged. James stood silent thinking, but couldnt' figure it out. "Nevermind, can I rejoin you, or are you just gonna to push me out"? Ryan asked. Steven nodded, and jestured to Ryan to come with them. He looked a little edgey, he could still see the look of fear and confusion on most of there faces. They spent a long time traveling silently, looking for a way out of this nightmare, until several of them said that they where feeling weak, and they sat down to rest a while.
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Keep it coming!