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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2006 3:49:02 GMT -5
Good work NM! Keep it up!  |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2006 4:38:18 GMT -5
yeh great stry Nm |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2006 5:07:38 GMT -5
hmmmmm interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2006 13:35:42 GMT -5
"I'm so bored of this, it just plain never ends" Ryan complained. They had just been sitting there for ages, bored, scared and hungry. Nothing had happened for a long time and they where getting paranoid, and it didn't help that the others where still a little afraid of Ryan too. Perhaps the main cause of the paranoia was the stravation, no one had had a single bite for at least two days.
"We've got to do something, we can't live like this".
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Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2006 13:48:14 GMT -5
hmm interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2006 4:46:26 GMT -5
"OK, we just need to not panic" Ryan decided, edging closer to the group. "Shall we sleep on it".
They nodded, but none of them wanted to stay too close to Ryan.
They had been alsleep for a fair while, about an hour or so, when they where woken by an insane sound.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2006 4:52:04 GMT -5
That's insane (hahahahahahahaha) *bud dum tis*  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2006 8:26:25 GMT -5
hmm interesting
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2006 12:49:14 GMT -5
Blaze you've written the exact same thing three times in a row -_-
Anyway more coming soon
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2006 16:52:37 GMT -5
Darting up they looked around for the source of the noise, which sounded somewhat like an explosion. Not noticing anything at first, Ryan was about to go back to sleep, when he saw Steven, standing in the middle of everyone. Normally the fact that Steven was awake while everyone else was sleeping wasn't exactly unblieveable, but the fact that he was on fire (literally) and his eyes where glowing with pure evil and corruption wqas much more surprising.
"NO, IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN" cried James.
"AGAIN" Ryan screamed in fear and confusion.
"This is what happened to you Ryan", Dayle whispered, his voice cracking with fear.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2006 17:17:45 GMT -5
woah how odd
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2006 6:06:38 GMT -5
Steven's body was surrounded by a red flame, that glowed brightly and flickered. He was moving in an almost unhuman nature, it was as though he was trying to thrash about and destroy something, but was having a fit at the same time.
"QUICK, TELL ME, HOW DID I GET OUT OF THIS STATE". Ryan screamed to the group, but none where listening. They where all focused on Steven.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2006 7:04:01 GMT -5
Wow nice update NM |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2006 7:34:10 GMT -5
woah. This is getting good. Good hook. The mystery of what this is all about keeps the reader reading. Great job
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2006 7:48:23 GMT -5
Now if only I knew what it was......
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