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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2007 4:08:05 GMT -5
Ryan sighed, and lifted himself back up. As he did so, Dayle and Hannah jumped away from him in shock and fear.
"What"!? several people asked.
"Y...your eyes just glowed red", Dayle stuttered pointing at Ryan.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2007 8:40:43 GMT -5
okay how very odd. Ryan with red glowing eyes. intereting
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Post by Deleted on Feb 22, 2007 13:24:15 GMT -5
hehe kool story nm keep it up
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 11:47:50 GMT -5
Ryan looked quite scared, not sure what it meant. Before anyone could do something else, his eyes suddenly glowed so brightly red that Ryan could see the glow emanating off of them himself. No matter what he did they glowing didn't stop, and he quickly saw the possible cause of the glowing eyes. Floating before them all, was the strange beast that had brought them to the wasteland in the first place.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2007 5:15:17 GMT -5
They all stumbled back in total fear. While they had already seen this creature a few times, he was just as heart stoppingly terrifying as he was every other time they had seen him. Looming a good 2 or 3 foot above everyone else, the creature spoke quietly too them.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2007 15:26:02 GMT -5
"I am Saint Anger, the saint of burning karma, no regrets and the bond between hatred and happiness". His voice sounded like animals being crushed the kind of machines reserved for destroying cars. It was as though every word he said was being vomited out of his mouth. "I can turn happiness into anger, but also vice versa".
The group stared at him, horrifyed and confused.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2007 19:17:34 GMT -5
Just ondering nm thoguh this is great and all why are your posts only like 5 lines. IF you comapre it to fm5, mechanos or any of the other stories there's are usually at least ten. Though some use very little detail not mentionign any names *cough*icemaster13*cough* anyway. other then that good post
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2007 4:57:49 GMT -5
They're only a few lines because that's all I can think of at the time
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2007 14:06:11 GMT -5
He looked at them, more with interest than for any other reason. He seemed suddenly quite calm, contary to his previous appearences.
"I suppose you would like to know what you're doing here".
They tried to nod, but such a thing seemed like it was beyond there reach. Even when calm and collected, almost kind, he was an imidating figure.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2007 12:22:03 GMT -5
"You'll have to find out" he screamed in a horrific voice that sounded worse than nails being scrapped across a black board. As he did so the whole enviroment they where in seemed to morph itself into something different, and much much more evil. It looked like Hell, with towering walls of flames and dark red rocks making up the entire wasteland. The group closed there and screamed in fear. When they opened there eyes again, they saw that St. Anger had dissapeared. There breathing was shallow, and there faces pale with fear despite the fire.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2007 15:36:59 GMT -5
"COME EVERYONE WE NEED TO FOCUS"!!!!!!!!! Ryan cried over the roaring flames and screams of fear. The fire walls turned out to be a sorta maze assortment, and where unnaturally cold despite being quite hot.
"What is up with that weirdo" Steven thought aloud some time later.
"I don't know, I just don't know" Ryan replied.
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2007 3:54:15 GMT -5
"Can we focus on getting out of here" piped up Dayle. They nodded, trying to further navigate the maze of fire. It was quite simple, despite being very long. Any maze can be figered out by keeping to the sides, and this was no exception.
The group had been traveling for hours by now, and they had practically given up on there feeble hopes of escape. It had been several days since they had last eaten, and the stress and pressure was creeping up on them. They could merely lie down and hope to either die or be saved.
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Post by Deleted on May 29, 2007 2:48:09 GMT -5
They had fallen asleep without really noticing, and where quite bewildered to wake up in a different setting. It was quite clearly still the wasteland, with its scorched red rocks, but this was not the place the group of kids had laid down at after getting threw the maze. While all of them where scared and confused, none where strong enough to say anything.
"Hey, some of them are stirring, bring some water".
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