Hidden Wastelands

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Stress, it's called being torn apart inside by hatred, or something, anyway any connection problems that I had this week seem to have gone, so whatever I said about me not being likely to do more stories is no longer valid, on with the story.
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'He took the pen out and started writing madly on the floor. 'I am Ryan, I am not alive, but I'm not dead' . The panic in the shop started up as they began to ran wildly and stupidly, fear taking over there senses. Too make them shut up Ryan tore up the metal railings that held all th magazines to the wall. Then smashing them out of his way he began too write again.

KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME'

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Lol i know when you got that from ^_^

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err very very stressy

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kotor said:

Lol i know when you got that from ^_^

So you like Metalica then?

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Just get on with the story.................

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I'm running out of ideas >_<

and I keep having connection problems sometimes.

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The panic rose and the few people in the shop bolted out screaming and crieing. Ryan grabbed a load of of drinks and threw them out the shop, running back down the road towards his house. It seems that Ryan completely forgot what he was originally doing. Finally reaching his house, wiping the tears out his eyes he ran at his door. To Ryan's complete shock and surprise he smashed into it with a lot of force and bounced back.

"You ok there Ryan?" came a voice from behind him, and turned to see Cara there!

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interesting. very interesting

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kk very good

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hmm if cara and ryan are there htne where are the rest of us

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You'll see, I just need to get a clearer idea of what I'm doing next and then I'll post more

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His mind drew a blank. How was this possible, what on earth was happening. Lost in his thoughts it took him a few seconds to realise that everything had just started twisting and deforming around him. Everything was distorting into nothing, then it all went black. Ryan stood alone in the blackness, scared. This was worse than the wasteland, nothing was more horrible than this. Then suddenly everything started swirling again, a different world and different people started coming into view. Purple rocks and the scared faces of his friends came into view, he was back in the wasteland, and everyone was staring at him in fear.

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Getting good NM! Keep it up!

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it's very very good.

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woooooooooooooooooo