A Tale of Adventure

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That was funny

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yes that was awesome. lets do it again

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Act 1
Melovor awaits

"Boys, take these with you, I understand you have to go back through the Crokea Bog, they are Earth Scrolls they can teach you all you need to know." Tekaram handed them some scruffy looking notes. "Come now boys its a long way to Melovor from here, but WAIT! I can teleport us there!" "No, wait, the last time you did that we both got seperated and I had to go find Jake." exclaimed Ray. "Fine than we will just go the long way..."replied the Sage. So they were off to Melovor, When they left the mountain a girl dressed in black leather armor weilding a really cool sword came and stopped them. "Wait....I heard you are traviling through Crokea Bog, here I wanted to give you these." said the mysterious women. "Who are you and are you a threat to us?" asked Jake "No, I have come with weapons from another region, for you a Nekram Shuriken, and for you this pack of Ice Shurikens."she handed the Nekram Shuriken to Ray and the Ice pack to Jake. "Than.....k you" said Jake but, she was gone. "Hmmmm... wel that was comepletly random!" yelled Ray "Give me those! I have to check them to see if they arent explosives or what not." said Sage Malkor "But.....we just got them...."said Jake. "Ray?! Ray?, Where did Ray go?" "Here I am!" yelled Ray. "Where did you go Ray?" asked Sage Malkor. "Nevermind that lets get through that stupid Bog." "No Ray, Where did you go?" asked Jake, Ray signaled Jake to come, "I'll tell you later." whispered Ray. "Well, we havent even left Dorbia yet....can we go now?" asked Jake "Ok, ok lets go." Now they finally left and arrived at the entrance to the Bog. "Uggghhh I can smell the stentch all ready." moaned Ray. "Hey Ray, maybe we can find those awsome fruits we found last time." said Jake "YEAH! But, only Sage Malkor knows the way to Melovor through here we may not even go the same way we did last time." "We are going to camp here." said Sage Malkor. Their camp was under a swampy tree and right beside a pit of bubbling nasty swamp goop."We are about One Days walk away from Melovor, if you hear anything just yell and I'll come." said Malkor. "Yea like we'll need your help old man." Whispered Jake.

Act II
Arrived at Melovor, Dark Disaster

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Hey, Ray, Jake. ;]

Lookin' good. You're getting better with writing as well. Keep it up!
And it's super cool that this story is going to be movie. Sa-weet! ;]

(And, wow... Our profiles look so similar, Ray! XD)

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Thanks Fm5! Yea its not going to be a big movie just like, a home movie.

Yeah I know I was playing Twilight princess today and I was using the Magic Armor but, I couldn't find any pics of Link in that armor so, I stuck with Red.

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hey dude this is very kool. and fm5 this movie will ROCK!

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Hey guys, this is big if you're a Tale of Adventure fan so make sure you read it thoroughly, because what is coming up you may not understand.
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Act II
Arrived at Melovor, Dark Disaster

The boys woke up before Sage Malkor and tried to get some training in before he woke up. "Hey, Jake wanna go through Sage Malkors stuff andsee if we can find cool spellbooks and scrolls?" asked Ray, "Hmmmm....sneaky....Why not." shrugged Jake. As the ysearched through his bag they found many cool and weird things in the mysterious bag. "Ewwww, eye of newt!" yelled Ray, "SHHHHH! QUIET!! you'll wake up the old man." replied Jake quickly. "Hey, Jake? What do you think Melovor will be like?" asked Ray, "I dunno I have heard many good things and bad things about the city, since it is the Merchant City Capitol of Zenzaris there are sure to be theives and beggars, I have also heard that they have a king named, King Chronis." replied Jake.
"Unhhh huh.....sounds like a cool place." there was a silent moment for about twenty seconds until. "Melovor is a large city with pillars and walls supposedly made of the most white of materials. The Kings castle stands at the top of the city about one hundred stories high." explained Jake, "Wow, what did you have in Dorbia before we left." asked Ray. *Step, Step* They heard something from behind them which sounded like footprints. "DAAAAHHHH!!!!" they both jumped up as high as possible out of fear.
"I Hate this Bog." groanded Jake, "Hey whats this?" pondered Ray, he had found a small note with the mark of a large M inscribed on it. The boys opened the note to find grave news of Melovor, the note read: Ray, Jake, and Elder Malkor, we despretly ask for your help, the city of Melovor has found a large Dark Portal looming over head. We have spotted many Beings coming to and from the portal, we fear it is not safe for the city and for our King. Please come to our aid.
signed, M.
"Hmmmm maybe we should show this to Sage Malkor." said Ray and turned to Gramps Malkor and he was gone, "Find anything intersting boys?" asked Sage Malkor, "Huh? O yea loo....SAGE MALKOR!!" exclaimed Jake. "Going through an old wizards bag! There are dangerous things in there." said Sage Malkor sternly, "Um...Sage Malkor we found a note that seemed to come out of nowhere. Malkor read the note and was astonished, "Boys, we must hurry Melovor needs us to come to their aid!" said Sage Malkor. "Jake, you know we never got to train with those spells...." whispered Ray. "Come now if we walk at a steady pace we will be there by dusk." As they walked for what seemed like hours through swamp bog and gas they came to a dirt road with a sign that read "Melovor ahead" suddenly when they looked towards the great city they saw the Dark Disater, a dark portal above Melovor, probobly two times as big as the one back at Danube. "You, Ray, come we must speak with you." said a mysterious voice, and Ray was gone in a large White Flash. Ray found himself in a Realm with nor trees, grass, or water, just open blinding light. A large bright flash appeared to Ray, and a Being floated in front of him. "Do not be alarmed, I am a Being of Light and I have grave news to speak to you." said the Being. "The King of Melovor will die, he will be possesed by and evil spirit." Ray stood in amazement at what he had heard. "There will also be the arriving of the Great Gate of Light which the dark ones may not enter, you may not let them enter, by doing so....we must turn you...to a Dark Commander make sure that you dont lose yourself to this side. "WAIT!! WHY ME? Jake is a chosen....to" before he could get "to" out he had already been sent back to his normal time. "Ray? You ok?"

Act 111
The Death of King Chronis,
The War Begins

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that was cool and i read it "thoroughly" lol

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There is a really cool fight scene and a new but dark spell for Ray
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Act 111
The Death of King Chronis,
The War Begins

"Ray, you ok? You look like you have just seen a ghost." said Jake, "It was

nothing Im just anxious to see what Melovor is like." replied Ray, As Ray, Jake, and

Sage Malkor made it towards the grand white gate into the city they saw that the door

had a large lock on it. "Hello up there!" Sage Malkor hollard to see if anyone was still in

the war towers. "Yes, What do you want." said the Knight, "We have a requested

presence in this City and we need entrance." replied Sage Malkor, "Very well you may

enter." As the large lock fell to the ground the gates to Melovor opened to reveal many

merchants, stalls, and items from different regions. "Oh look there's a hat stall! I want

one!" said Ray while running towards the stall. "Hmmmm which one, so many different

colors." "Yes boy, there are many colors and sizes, you seem to look like a Black Hat

kind of person."said the Merchant, "How much merchant?"asked Ray, "fifty gold

pieces" replied the Merchant. "Ok, Jake you want one?","Hmm...sure why not." They

both had bought two, the hat had a pointed top and strange zippers on them when

they were finsished looking at them the put the away. "Boys, we are here for

something other than shopping...." said Sage Malkor, "Ok right.....that." Ray looked up

and still saw the Dark Portal reminding him of what the Beings told him earlier.

"Excuse me maiden, where might I find the passage to the King's Castle?" asked Jake,

"Yes just go east from here and take the flight of stairs up." replied the maiden. The

"flight of stairs" didnt look like just a normal flight of stairs. "Two thousand, five

hundred, and ninety eight, two thousand, five hundred, and ninety nine...Hey there are

only two thousand, five hundred, and ninety nine stairs, thats going to bug

me...."moaned Ray. When they finally reached the top of the stairs they came across an

amazing sight, the King's Castle, Chronis Castle, it was very big, white, and there were

many torch carrying knights standing guard. "Well, what do we knock?" asked Ray,

"No we just enter." replied Sage Malkor, and he was serious they just walked right in.
"Bow, boys" said Sage Malkor, "Oh right." said Ray and Jake. "Hello citenzens, what

brings you to my castle..."said the King, as they looked upon King Chronis they saw an

dark aura about him. "You arent the king..."said Ray, "Hmm...of course I am!"exclaimed

the King, "No..because a normal person doesn't carry a Dark presence about

them..."replied Jake, "Hmmmm smart boys...the wizard has taught you well..." As the

king stood up he pulled out a large sword that stretched atleast ten feet long. "So then

are you going to kill me..." "Guardian Strife BLADE!!!" the Blade appeared to Ray with

no hesatation, "Scorvious Blade!" As did Jake's. "No! He is possesed by a Dark Being if

you kill the being you kill....", "The King to...well, you are a wise wizard.." said the

Possesed King. "Boys....you must do it....for the sake of Melovor...", "What?! Sage

Malkor you can't be serious!" said Jake, "Do it..he gave us permission didnt HE!" Ray

charged towards the King, "RAY NO!" yelled Jake. "HAAAA! Red Tempest!!" Ray flew

towards Chronis. "Hmmm...good technique but, mine is better.....DISPEL!!" countered the

Dark King, and with those words Ray's Red Tempest was killed off. "JAKE GO! Ray is

in trouble!" said Sage Malkor, "Right, Terroza" Shards of Ice flung

towards the King. "HUH!" all ten shards pierced the king. "Watch

this...Darkos...Melovos..Aridos." A large black ball of darkness was summoned spinning

in Ray's hand. "Like it....I do..." said Ray, "What is this....thats not Ray...." said Sage

Malkor. "NOW!" the large blast of darkness exploded and sent King Chronis into a small

corner. The king now had a hole in his chest, "Is he...dead?" asked Jake. "Haha, I knew

he couldn't stand up to me...of course he is." *BANG* there was a loud noise that

sounded like twenty dragons roaring. "Its time, the war has begun....The Gate to Light

will be opened and I will close it!"

Act 1V
The War
Death of Sage Malkor

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Here it is the Final Act in AToA, The END?
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Act 1V
The War
Death of Sage Malkor

As the Dark Army below them seemed as though it was gettng larger every second
Jake and Sage Malkor watch as a dark change was overcoming Ray."Well? Lets go!

Arent we Melovor's last help?" hissed Ray, "He is right but, I assure you boys...this

wont be an easy fight." said the Sage, "I will take us there." said Ray, "But how?!"

asked Jake, "Shhhhh best do what he says Jake his power has reached even higher

than mine......he can do this." replied the Sage, "Bysanthar, Cycor, Sentovis." hissed Ray
and then a cloud of dark smoke came withering out of the floor, then with a large

purple flash of lightning they vanished to the battlefield. "WAIT!" said the Mysterious

Boy, "Darn, I missed them, forgive me...Grandfather." he whispered. When they arrived

at the battlefront their numbers were greater than before. "Hahaha, the more the

marry-er right Jake?" Ray said with a smirk, "Yea.....Right" replied Jake, as they stepped

onto the dark plains a large flash of light that was similar to the one before they

entered Melovor appeared to them, it was the Gate, with its large white regal doors it

shined with a white radiance. "I have to close it....or I will...be like this...always"

whsipered Ray. *Bum Bum* the horn of battle had been blown, *Bum Bum*, "This is it,

isn't it Sage Malkor?" asked Jake, "Oh yes, this will be a dark battle indeed." replied

Sage Malkor. "AAAAHHH! AHHH!" groanded Ray while falling to the hard ground. "His

condition it has worsend." said Sage Malkor, "What would you know about it, Sage...."

said Xedris while coming from a dark cloud. "Yes, yes, his condition is worsening to

bad you can do nothing about it until he closes that Gate." hissed Xedris "Your wrong!"

yelled Jake, "I will do something to help Ray, even if it takes my life", *Shine*, his

Scorvious Blade appeared to him without hesitation. "Ahhh well, help him if you must

the War is just beginning. "Garock NE!" a blast of purple lightning shot out from Ray's

hand into Xedris. "Don't you ever talk like that again...its annoying......trust me I know

annoying.." said Ray, Xedris disappeared. *WAHHHHH* The sound of swords being

drawn were heard althrough out Zenzaris that moment, and after the charge of the

Army. "Let's go!" exclaimed Jake, "HAAAAAA!!" yelled Ray. The Army and the two

chosens met in battle. *SHING* *CLASH*, Jake and Ray were fighting like two

champions, blasting all the spells they knew at the dark human like creatures, and

suddenly from behind Jake, *SHING* Jake had been stabbed, "JAKE!!! NOOOOO!!!!" Ray

flew towards Jake to help him. "Are you alright? How many fingers am I holding up?"
"Twenty?" replied Jake, *HAA* a dark being tried to attack, "Scarovis", a magic sheild

surrounded Jake, "Stay here.." Ray said while climbing to his feet. "DARKOS,

MELOVOS, ARIDOS." the dark sphere was summoned spinning in Ray's hand,

"OMEGIS" the dark sphere becaming larger, "NOW!" Ray sent the large sphere spinning

taking out hundreds of Beings. While Ray was fighting to get to the Gate Sage Malkor

came to Jake. "Oh, Oh No, Jake, how did I know this would happen..."Sage Malkor said

with tears in his eyes, "Helloooo, Sage Malkor, is that you?" asked Jake, "Yes, Im

here.." replied Sage Malkor, "Can you do one thing for me Jake? Can you close your

eyes for me?", "Yes! Naptime." replied Jake, "Arkos, Revivis!" the stone on Sage

Malkor's staff broke into pieces revealing a glowing beautiful feather, a pheonix

feather. "Stay Safe Jake, Ray....Chosens of Zenzaris and Danube." whispered Sage

Malkor, and in his final words the Sage sacrificed his life for Jake's. Ray had been

fightning for quite awhile until he came to the Gate. "This is it! This will end

everything." "Beings of Light I give my Dark Side to you, close this Gate and end this

WAR!" yelled Ray. With the closing of the Gate went the Darkbeings and Xedris. "Hope

you rought Xedris." said Ray, "JAKE! YOUR ALIVE! Hey wheres Sage.....", "He did it on

his own Ray, if I was conscious at the time I would have stopped him...He did it for us,

But, he left us a note.

My Boys,
"It was fun...all the adventures..." Tears had covered most of the paper but

one sentence. "You will find my grandson, Malkor, in Melvor at the Tavern, he is

waiting for you."
Thank you two,
SM
P.S.: Give me a decent funeral
So they did.

THE END?

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aww man its over. well it was an awesome ending. i cant wait till the movie and book 2...

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Here is the alternate ending
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*Alternate Ending*

Xemnort: My Lord, Xedris was killed by one of the chosens
Dark Lord Morvis: Well, he was nothing to the Dark Kingdom, he was a weak one anyways, as long as they dont find the Seven Swords we are fine besides, they think that they have won but, the war has just begun
They Dark Lord turns and looks over strange new Dark Beings and an Armada of Darkness

A Tale of Adventure: Legend of the Seven Swords