Should I continue?

[Deleted]

hey guys. i was wondering if i should continue the organization stories in the story section. it was awhile ago, and ive stopped writing, but i had ideas for it. but if i should or shouldnt continue, please tell me.

[Haunter 360]

You continue if you want to. They're your stories afterall!

[Deleted]

i know but i wanted to know if you guys thought i should continue. i dont mean to sound rude, but would u read them?

[Deleted]

Hey IM,
I think you should continue your story, I definitly enjoyed reading it.

[Deleted]

ok, well i guess i will.

*runs off to type story*
anymore comments, go ahead.

[Timewarp]

do it if you want i'm not really bothered but what are they about i might go and read one of them to find out

[Deleted]

yeah, go 2 the stories section and read The Organization Part I first, so u can see part 2

[Deleted]

i woudl read your stories, but i jsut find they seem to lack detial and be rushed a bit. its the same way i started out and to be honest it took a while for me to get as good as ia am now and i'm nothing comapred to fm5, Lilliana and Haunter 350. i was taught how to write in detail by fm5. Maybe you should ask for lessons too so you cna really put detail into your posts. I'd wait till she gets her new computer back though.

I'm not insulting your writing all i'm syaing is it needs a bit of refining,.

[Deleted]

I tend to spend time writing stories, and gradually start writing less till I stop, then get some new idea's and start up again, so I recommend that you try to keep your story going whenever you get an idea.

[Deleted]

Yeah thats a good diea wolfie. in fact i;m using that at the moment except the slowly getting leesss till i get an idea. when i run out of ideas i jsut stop.

[FlameMaster5]

blaze said:

i woudl read your stories, but i jsut find they seem to lack detial and be rushed a bit. its the same way i started out and to be honest it took a while for me to get as good as ia am now and i'm nothing comapred to fm5, Lilliana and Haunter 350. i was taught how to write in detail by fm5. Maybe you should ask for lessons too so you cna really put detail into your posts. I'd wait till she gets her new computer back though.

I'm not insulting your writing all i'm syaing is it needs a bit of refining,.

Awww... That's so nice of you Blaze. Thank you. ^_^ Well, I'd be willing to help IM13 if he wants, but only if he wants it. I got my PC up and running again, so I'm available. (Lol, and I'm not a mean teacher, ok? XD)


Anyways, IM13, I think you should do so if your heart desires it. When I was 13 years old, I started randomly writing my own story(this is The Heroes of Time's Destiny) based off characters I adored. It was just about things I liked at the time, and my own imagination combined. I still have what I wrote, but it looks awful compared to what I can do now. So, I plan to modify EVERYTHING once I'm done with a few of my other tales I'm working on currently.

My point is... Go ahead, write it all out. And with a few years of writing and growing up, you'll look back at it and say, "This was great when I was writing it, now it looks terrible." The ideas are NOT rubbish, just your experience currently. You always get better after time and practice. So, don't worry about what it looks like now. Ok? Just write it and then you can modify it too if you like later.

(Here's a tip: NEVER THROW AWAY YOUR IDEAS. Every story can be good with detail, well-planned plots and interesting characters. And, most of all, don't give up. ^_^)

[Deleted]

thanks guys, for the advice.
o and fm5, would u mind if u gave me lessons?

[Tymki]

I don't know how to do writing so that, instead of writing like you speak, you can add more on to it, and it isn't just a tiny paragraph which is written really quickly...
Do any of you know what I'm talking about?