Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2005 13:29:36 GMT -5
Hello everyone and I'm back for more artwork updates 
Enjoy!!! 
Slam Dunk Character Kaede Rukawa
Crisis Core Final Fantasy with Final Fantasy Advent Children fusion artworks
Another Crono Crusade Fan Art
A colored version of my previous Sesshomaru Line art
Seijiro Hiko from Samurai X colored version
Noir Character Kirika Yuumura Fan Art
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Jiyuujin: *felt something strange* HUH!
Jiyuujin: *finally realized that he left something at the park* OH NOOO!!
Jiyuujin: *had three states feeling right now...that is* PANIC STATE... ...HAVING FUN OR TRIPPING
Jiyuujin: *feeling depressed* *Sigh* I guess I have to borrow notes from my friends....
Caption or Kanji translation: RAKEISHA SCHOOL
Word from the Author: If you see the emblem of the school by chance....This is the actual emblem and Badge of my uniform in my school in my homeland
with the story....
Jiyuujin: *about to enter RAKEISHA SCHOOL* *speaking in his thoughts again* Well...let's go in shall we?
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Jiyuujin: *calling out his friends* Kiei Geiro-Do!!!...Soumei Urema!!!
Kiei: Well...well...look who we have here....
Soumei: *Surprised* Huh!!
Soumei: Howdy?
Kiei: Su'p my man?
Jiyuujin: *Remains silent* .....
Jiyuujin: *about to laugh*
Jiyuujin: * so hard* AHAHAHA!!!
Soumei and Kiei: Uh did you it your head or something? * *
Jiyuujin: *joking* No...It's just you guys look like a fine couple to me...
Soumei and Kiei: * Surprised to Jiyuujin's response * What!!! Are you serious?
Soumei: * a bit angry * * Hey!!! That's not funny!!!
Kiei: * Pissed * Yeah!!! Were not even dating yet!!!
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Soumei: Hey! You don't have to shout you know...
Kiei: Uh...Hehe. My Bad!!!
Soumei and Kiei: * and changing the subject * Well...enough about us...wazzaap bud?
Jiyuujin: Um...
Jiyuujin: *spills the beans* Sigh...
Jiyuujin: Err...I just left my notebook somewhere around the park...HAHAHAHA...How's that?
Soumei and Kiei: Oh brother... Oh my!!!
Somei and Kiei: Hmmmm.... so this means that you'll treat a free lunch for us at recess for thanking us for your help isn't that right?
Jiyuujin: Yup! Do I have a choice other than that? Boohoo...why me....
Soumei and Kiei: * laughing so hard * HA HA HA HA
Jiyuujin: * Felt humiliated but laughed with them anyway*
Word from the author: as you noticed at the left corner image at the bottom box...there is at the background where Kiei, Jiyuujin and Soumei are laughing together...
I added someone...or somebody that appeared at the background...it's rather strange to add this up in the story but...I was just really having fun adding this up on this page
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Narrator: Suddenly...a mystery character appears out of nowhere...
: * angry like a wolf that's about to attack it's prey * GRRRR....
Jiyuujin Soumei and Kiei: * three of them were surprised by * AACK!!!
Narrator: * revealing mystery characters name in captions * Baruti Sensei
Baruti Sensei: * calms down * Sigh...Hey there three Musketeers...Class is about to start so please attend class in time ok...But...if either one of you gets late...
Jiyuujin Kiei and Soumei: * in disbelief * Musketeers???
Baruti Sensei: * them by revealing his scary look * You all know the consequence right?
Jiyuujin and Kiei: * Complies to Baruti Sensei's conditions * SIR YES SIR!!!
Soumei: * complies to Baruti Sensei but...* Yes sir... *speaking in her thoughts* OOOH! Scary
Baruti Sensei: Understood!!! There's no time to waste let's go...
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Narrator: Meanwhile...
Baruti Sensei: * felt another presence nearby * What!
?: * greeting * Good Morning Everyone!!!
Kiei and Soumei: * heard? greeting * !!!
Jiyuujin: : * heard her voice too * Huh!!!
Jiyuujin: * recognized the voice and looked back at? * Wait a sec...that voice sounds familiar...
Jiyuujin: * finally recognized the person who was greeting them * * speaking in his thoughts and a bit shocked...* AACK!! Why her of all people
Jiyuujin: * feeling nervous * Sigh ...I hope she doesn't know I'm the same person that we met a while ago
?: *talking to Jiyuujin* Why hello there good looking ...Nice to meet you...Well you see...I'm a transfer student and my previous school is too far from my place...
So...I decided that I'll study here instead because this school is more convenient for me to attend since it's near my location...By the way...it's nice to meet you sempai
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Jiyuujin: *either nervous or too shy to communicate with?* I...I...I.um. I see..W..W...welcome...to Rakeisha School...t...t...
transferee...I...I...It's my pleasure to meet you too...
Narrator: Japanese kanji translated " Beautiful "
?: Hihihi your too shy to talk with me...Does this mean that your currently single and no girlfriend yet?
Narrator: DOOM is written in Jiyuujin's background...
Jiyuujin: * Shocked and Stunned by her response...*
Kiei and Soumei: * Surprised by? response as well...*
Kiei: Bingo!!! But...wrong move missy
Soumei: Unbelievable!!! Very straightforward statement indeed...
Baruti Sensei: *remains silent for a while*.....
Baruti Sensei: Hmph..young people these days...
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Narrator: Meanwhile in the classroom...
Jiyuujin: *still in a state of shock* UUUOOH...
Soumei: This is awful... *both of them are worried about him*
Kiei: You got that right...
Soumei: That was quite a shock treatment isn't it?
Kiei: * complies to Soumei * Here...here...this is one of his weakpoints that's for sure
?: I'm the worst... *feeling depressed*
Jiyuujin: AAAOOUUUH!!!
Soumei: No...it's ok. Don't worry about it...he'll be just fine...He will be back in no time for sure...
Kiei: *agrees to Soumei* Yup
?: But still... I apologize...I had no idea he had this kind of condition... * still feeling depressed *
Narrator: Miscellaneous statements from the crew a.k.a comic developers...
Arden: Hi Ho! * greeting *
Mickey: Heey! * greeting *
Mark: HEHEHE * trying to haunt the author *
Author: * about to sleep * meet thy maker? zzzzz
?: * still feeling guilty about Jiyuujin * I know but...I just can't just stay put and do nothing about the situation...After all...it's my fault
to begin with...I...I just want to show him how sorry I am for what I've done that makes him suffer
like this because of me...
Soumei and Kiei: * both thinking the same thing about? * major drama queen!!!
Soumei and Kiei: * agreed to help her * Alright! we'll help you...please standby...
Soumei: * thinking * Hmmm... * remains silent * .....
Kiei: * thinking too * Hmmmm... * remains silent * .....
Soumei: * Plan A: imagines? cooling Jiyuujin's head by applying cold ice on his head to
return back to normal...
?: Plan B: * has no on how to help Jiyuujin recover from his state *
Kiei: Plan C: * being a naughty person today *?: Oooh...please be gentle with me...
* Jiyuujin once again... WHAAH!!! Hehehe...this is fun
?: *trying to calm down * * remains silent for a while *... I got to calm down...
?: * feels relaxed * I think I'm ready now...I don't know what might cure his condition but...I have to do my best as I can...
Narrator: The next picture is another strange scene indeed...the author added some extra characters which is an unknown mage summoning a ghost that appears out of nowhere...
It appears that the ghost somehow intentionally smashed a tennis ball towards? and that's what happened... Oh and pls. note that they are both in cloak mode so
in other words...They're obviously invisible... to the story
Soumei and Kiei: !!!! * saw an object going directly to? * a ball???
?: * :clueless as well and remains silent while she's on her way to comfort Jiyuujin *
?: * suddenly realizes she stepped on something * Eh
?: * about to loose balance * W-what the!!!
Narrator: obviously the ball that? is stepping on is making her loose balance and then...
?: * she accidentally slips and falls towards Jiyuujin while he is still at a shock condition * WH-WHOA!!!
Narrator: this picture shows that Jiyuujin and? both got collided by the impact??
Jiyuujin: * was back to normal but felt something soft from his face and thinking it was a...* Pillow?
?: * surprised but...* !!!!!
Jiyuujin and?:* both remained silent and...*
Narrator: another of this is in the background... doom
Kiei and Soumei: *shocked* OH MY!!!
Jiyuujin: * as well * GASP!!!!!
?: OOPSIE...
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Jiyuujin: * ignores? for a while and remains silent * ....
?: * worried about Jiyuujin * Ummm...
Jiyuujin: * still silent but suddenly smiles *
?: * wonders if she made Jiyuujin upset * I wonder if I did something wrong to make him feel this way...OOOH...
?: * surprised from the moment Jiyuujin placed his hand on her shoulders * WHAAAH!!!
Jiyuujin: * giving her a warm smile *
?: what's he going to do with me???
Jiyuujin: * showing his gratitude for? * I know you didn't mean to offend me a while ago but...
I'm really grateful for cheering me up while I was at a state of shock...Thank you for worrying about me
?: * and here's what's on her mind...* that was unexpected... * responds to Jiyuujin *
Oh! Uh...errr...no problem...
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Jiyuujin: * cheers up?: Well...then enjoy studying here transferee...
?: * but gave Jiyuujin a warm smile too * Yeah!!!
Narrator: Now Jiyuujin and? temporarily part ways for now...
Misc captions: Whoosh...Flutter
Narrator: This moment shocked his friends...
Kiei: W.W...WHAT JUST...
Soumei: Happened just now???
Somei: * what she thinks about Jiyuujin * he really changed a lot since we were new friends
back then...it's kinda strange because they are both strangers and they don't know each other that much but still...
Kiei: *fired up* Hmph...now this is getting to be interesting...I wonder what will happen to them
next time...
Narrator: On the first day of class...
Baruti Sensei: * greeting his fellow students * O H A Y O!!! (means goodmorning in Japanese)
Students: * all responds and greets Baruti Sensei but...* OHAYO Baruti Sempai
Baruti Sensei: * got * CALL ME SENSEI!!!
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Baruti Sensei: * about today's lesson * *Ehem* Now class...For today's lesson...you are all required to write a comprehensive story about yourself...
Baruti Sensei: * still * Well...since some of you students are new here in Rakeisha School...I welcome all of you for studying here and I hope that
you all enjoy life as a student in this school... Well... with today's lesson...It is fair enough for all of you to write something about your first experience about this
school...
Baruti Sensei: * confirms if the students understood his instructions for today's lesson * Is that clear my students?
Students: Affirmative Sir!!!
Baruti Sensei: * asks his students to do a roll call * Very well...Before you students all proceed
with your task...Please don't forget to introduce yourselves to our new students...You all know that
it is our custom to greet ourselves to others every beginning of class.....
Students: * complaining to Baruti Sensei..* Uh...Sir...do we have to? Oh...come on...sheesh...this
is a waste of time...
Baruti Sensei: :angry: GRRR...DO I HAVE TO JUDGE THY PUNISHMENT TO ALL OF YOU THE HARD WAY!!!
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Students: * from a moment at Baruti Sensei * Errr...No Sir...ALRIGHT CLASS!!! You heard our sensei...Please...identify yourselves alphabetically....Is that clear everyone...?
New students: Yes!!! Sempai!!!
Senior students: * noticed that there were four uninvited guests * Hey!!! those four on the top left corner are not permitted to attend class...
Narrator: * Explaining the names of the comic developers or staffs * Starting from the left...Chuck (author's nickname) Arden (a friend of mine) Mickey (my best friend) Mark (my bro bro )
Misc: dialogues coming from the crew...
Chuck: No way!!!
Arden: Sigh
Mickey: What the? Grrrrrr... badtrip
Mark: HEHEHE...I'LL HAUNT YOU DOWN FOR ETERNITY BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Senior Student: * of Mark * ACK!! Please have mercy...Forgive me but...I'm just following school policies...This was a direct order from our Sensei....P-Please don't haunt me for eternity...
Mark: * responds * I see...I'll let it slide this time...your lucky that your life is spared for now AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Senior Student: OK!! for the rollcall!!!!
Narrator: * note * extra character's appear in the comics at a random scene for some reason Hahaha isn't that fun or what?
Narrator: Here are the list of names of all students of Rakeisha School
Student#2: Begum
Student#3: Basuta
Student#5: Heiwa
Student#6: Jiyuujin
Student#7: Joui
Student#10: Kuro
Student#11: Kishi
Student#12: Koi
Narrator: More list of Students continued....
Student#8: Junsui
Student#9: Joshu
Student#13: Leia
Student#14: Muteki
Student#15: Otokomae
Student#16: Soumei
Student#17: Shiro
Student#4: Kiei
Narrator: *reads what's written on the monitor of the computer * Initializing data to the network system....Connecting data to Rakeisha School...Gathering all data profiles from present students in class E001...Proceeding analysis...
Narrator: Final roll call list
Student#18: Saikoubi
Student#19: Takaharu
Student#20: Tsutomu
Student#21: Kouki
finally Student# 1: Koshima
Students: * giving their comments to Baruti Sensei * But Sensei!!! Isn't Koshima not arranged alphabetically according to the student numbers? There must be some kind of mistake ....Should we rearrange the student numbers once again ...Or could you please explain to us the reason Sensei?
Baruti Sensei: Certainly...I'll tell you a story about the Koshima generation so listen carefully... *Ehem* Alright let's begin...
Baruti Sensei: Narrating the Koshima Generation... The Koshima Family consists of five generations...The 1st generation of the Koshima's are the founder of this school...There are countless drafts or sketches and blueprints of designing this school...Next, the 2nd generation of the Koshima finally concluded what structure design,models on what Rakeisha School will look like and finished building the whole school for several months later...And then, the third gen. of Koshima's gather and collaborated intellegence, made observations comparing other schools on what's best for concluding a better school policy for Rakeisha school...Also, the 4th gen. of Koshima established it's school's grand opening of this school...No one knows for certain for what happened to the owner of the 4th gen. Koshima...He just disappeared without a trace and was gone forever ...And finally, we were all that there was a last descendant of the Koshima's who is turned out to be a woman....All of the past generations of the Koshima were always a male gender....And now here we are in the present with the last Koshima generation...This is for certain a mystery for me on what will the last Koshima...
Narrator: Continued on the next page
Narrator: to the story...
Baruti Sensei: * continued...* await for our future...So now you all understand my fellow students...This is the reason why you must respect snd honor the name of the Koshima's because they have worked so hard for this school for generations...This is my reason and conclusion for all of you... Did I make myself clear?
Students: Yes!!! Sensei!!! Affirmative!!!
Baruti Sensei: GOOD!!! Well then...let's now proceed with our writing task as planned...After all you students are done writing for your statements about this school...You all are hereby permitted to take your breaktime...Is that clear everyone?
Students: YES SIR!!!!
Baruti Sensei: SHOBU!!! (begin in Japanese)
End of volume 1 Volume 2 is coming soon!!! So how's the story so far? Here's my sneek peek for page 1 of volume 2 everyone!!! 
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Narrator: moving on to the story of season...All students from Rakeisha School are now working in progress for their comprehensive writing journal....Their first journal should at least take five minutes before times runs out before submitting it to their sensei...
What's written on the blackboard: Journal of the Day "Your first day of school. "
Time limit before sumission: five minutes
Begum: .........
Koshima: ........
Basuta: Hmph!!!
Heiwa: ..........
Joui: ........
Jiyuujin: ........
More fan arts and miscellanous stuffs updated as well!!!! Enjoy!!!
hehehe....I think I posted this artwork before but...oh well
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Phew that will be all for my gallery update for today More art updates coming soon!!! See ya again sometime Take care everyone ;D
Dialogue order page 1:
Girl: Oh noo! *soccer ball falls towards the boy*
Boy: La....la...la *singing*
Soccer ball : Whoosh!!!!
*ball hits the boys head* Boink*
Boy: Owww!!
Boy:*starting to cry* sniff....
Boy: U U U WAH! *Girl approaches boy*
Boy: WHAAH! *Girl remains silent*
Girl: I...I'm sss..sorry
Boy: *silent and stares at the girl*
Dialogue order:
Girl: Um...excuse me...
Boy: Huh?
Girl: I...I'm sorry...I didn't mean to hurt you..
Gir: I know it's not much but...I hope this helps *girl immediately hugs the boy* Pain....pain..go away...la...la...la...la...
Boy: NYAAH!
Boy: *complimenting the girl* Umm...thank you...the pain's gone now....
Girl: No problem *girl giving him a warm smile*
Dialogue order:
Boy: *asking the girls name* Err...watz your name?
Girl: *apologizing to the boy and introducing herself* Oh...sorry, hehe...silly me...we haven't introduced ourselves yet....well my name is "LEIA YUUBI" * LEIA asking the boy's name* and you are?
Narrator: Playing arm wrestling
Boy: *revealing his name* my name is Jiyuujin Oruma
Leia: I see....it's nice to meet you Jiyuujin
Jiyuujin and Leia: *both laughing* Wahaha Nyahaha
Jiyuujin and Leia singing: LA LA LA LA LA LA
Leia: Well...I'm glad that your alright...Is the pain gone for good...? take care my friend
Jiyuujin: Take care my friend....I will miss you
Dialogue order:
Leia: *bidding farewell to Jiyuujin* Sayonara!!
Jiyuujin: *falls in love* hihi
Jiyuujin: *narrating his story* Ever since that day we've part ways....I had a thought in my mind when will I meet her again someday...It was a little moment from us to be friends...I really felt happy being with her...I felt comfort, love,happiness and at the same time...togetherness...I think Eventhough we're strangers.....somehow...I had this feeling within me that we've met somewhere before....
Narrator: 9 years later.....
Alarm clock: BOOO BOOYAH BWAAHAHA
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DODIALOGUE ORDER )
Jiyuujin: *Turns off the alarm clock* "CLICK"
Jiyuujin: *speaking in his thoughts* Hehehe...seriously...This alarm brightens my day for some reason...
Jiyuujin: *staring at the mirror* *remains silent for a while* Sparkling clean hehe...
: HEY YOU!!!
Jiyuujin: * by the voice calling him out of nowhere* HAAAH?!!
: Breakfast is ready...don't take too long there ya?
Jiyuujin: *replying to* Alright...*speaking in his thoughts again* Hmph...that scared the heck out of me shouting out of nowhere...Oh well...I guess I have to groom myself then...
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Jiyuujin: *grooming himself* Ok!! Time to go
Narrator: *Note* Eating scene is skipped...
Narrator: Jiyuujin walks on his way to the subway station....*Riding the subway scene is also skipped* Now...the scene takes place at the park....
Narrator: Meanwhile at the park...
Jiyuujin: *had a strange feeling* What!!! *then he finally realize what he has done* Oh my....
Jiyuujin: *feeling guilty* This is bad
?: *suddenly laughs for no reason* AHAHAHA!!!
Jiyuujin: !!!!! *surprised by?*
Jiyuujin: *Staring at? and suddenly shouted...* WHOA! *to her*
?: *wakes up from Jiyuujin's voice* Hmmmm..?
?: *greeting Jiyuujin and still on the situation* Uh...hi there...is there something wrong with my face?
Jiyuujin: Umm...nope
Jiyuujin: *speaking in his thoughts again* I thought I was a gonner I...I was just hearing things that's all HAHAHA...*Jiyuujin sighs and calls it a close call but still feels guilty about it
Jiyuujin: *tells? something before he leaves* Sss...Sorry but I got to go...See ya!!!
?: * still * Eh?
?: *thinking about Jiyuujin* Hmm...what a shy guy...although I admit that he has a charming side within him......Hihihi
To be continued.....
Hehe..how's the story so far? More updates on this comic series will be added soon
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Enjoy!!! 
Slam Dunk Character Kaede Rukawa
Crisis Core Final Fantasy with Final Fantasy Advent Children fusion artworks
Another Crono Crusade Fan Art
A colored version of my previous Sesshomaru Line art
Seijiro Hiko from Samurai X colored version
Noir Character Kirika Yuumura Fan Art
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Jiyuujin: *felt something strange* HUH!
Jiyuujin: *finally realized that he left something at the park* OH NOOO!!
Jiyuujin: *had three states feeling right now...that is* PANIC STATE... ...HAVING FUN OR TRIPPING
Jiyuujin: *feeling depressed* *Sigh* I guess I have to borrow notes from my friends....
Caption or Kanji translation: RAKEISHA SCHOOL
Word from the Author: If you see the emblem of the school by chance....This is the actual emblem and Badge of my uniform in my school in my homeland
with the story....
Jiyuujin: *about to enter RAKEISHA SCHOOL* *speaking in his thoughts again* Well...let's go in shall we?
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Jiyuujin: *calling out his friends* Kiei Geiro-Do!!!...Soumei Urema!!!
Kiei: Well...well...look who we have here....
Soumei: *Surprised* Huh!!
Soumei: Howdy?
Kiei: Su'p my man?
Jiyuujin: *Remains silent* .....
Jiyuujin: *about to laugh*
Jiyuujin: * so hard* AHAHAHA!!!
Soumei and Kiei: Uh did you it your head or something? * *
Jiyuujin: *joking* No...It's just you guys look like a fine couple to me...
Soumei and Kiei: * Surprised to Jiyuujin's response * What!!! Are you serious?
Soumei: * a bit angry * * Hey!!! That's not funny!!!
Kiei: * Pissed * Yeah!!! Were not even dating yet!!!
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Soumei: Hey! You don't have to shout you know...
Kiei: Uh...Hehe. My Bad!!!
Soumei and Kiei: * and changing the subject * Well...enough about us...wazzaap bud?
Jiyuujin: Um...
Jiyuujin: *spills the beans* Sigh...
Jiyuujin: Err...I just left my notebook somewhere around the park...HAHAHAHA...How's that?
Soumei and Kiei: Oh brother... Oh my!!!
Somei and Kiei: Hmmmm.... so this means that you'll treat a free lunch for us at recess for thanking us for your help isn't that right?
Jiyuujin: Yup! Do I have a choice other than that? Boohoo...why me....
Soumei and Kiei: * laughing so hard * HA HA HA HA
Jiyuujin: * Felt humiliated but laughed with them anyway*
Word from the author: as you noticed at the left corner image at the bottom box...there is at the background where Kiei, Jiyuujin and Soumei are laughing together...
I added someone...or somebody that appeared at the background...it's rather strange to add this up in the story but...I was just really having fun adding this up on this page
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Narrator: Suddenly...a mystery character appears out of nowhere...
: * angry like a wolf that's about to attack it's prey * GRRRR....Jiyuujin Soumei and Kiei: * three of them were surprised by
* AACK!!!Narrator: * revealing mystery characters name in captions * Baruti Sensei
Baruti Sensei: * calms down * Sigh...Hey there three Musketeers...Class is about to start so please attend class in time ok...But...if either one of you gets late...
Jiyuujin Kiei and Soumei: * in disbelief * Musketeers???
Baruti Sensei: * them by revealing his scary look * You all know the consequence right?
Jiyuujin and Kiei: * Complies to Baruti Sensei's conditions * SIR YES SIR!!!
Soumei: * complies to Baruti Sensei but...* Yes sir... *speaking in her thoughts* OOOH! Scary
Baruti Sensei: Understood!!! There's no time to waste let's go...
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Narrator: Meanwhile...
Baruti Sensei: * felt another presence nearby * What!
?: * greeting * Good Morning Everyone!!!Kiei and Soumei: * heard
? greeting * !!!Jiyuujin: : * heard her voice too * Huh!!!
Jiyuujin: * recognized the voice and looked back at
? * Wait a sec...that voice sounds familiar...Jiyuujin: * finally recognized the person who was greeting them * * speaking in his thoughts and a bit shocked...* AACK!! Why her of all people
Jiyuujin: * feeling nervous * Sigh ...I hope she doesn't know I'm the same person that we met a while ago
?: *talking to Jiyuujin* Why hello there good looking ...Nice to meet you...Well you see...I'm a transfer student and my previous school is too far from my place...So...I decided that I'll study here instead because this school is more convenient for me to attend since it's near my location...By the way...it's nice to meet you sempai
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Jiyuujin: *either nervous or too shy to communicate with
?* I...I...I.um. I see..W..W...welcome...to Rakeisha School...t...t...transferee...I...I...It's my pleasure to meet you too...
Narrator: Japanese kanji translated " Beautiful "
?: Hihihi your too shy to talk with me...Does this mean that your currently single and no girlfriend yet? Narrator: DOOM is written in Jiyuujin's background...
Jiyuujin: * Shocked and Stunned by her response...*
Kiei and Soumei: * Surprised by
? response as well...* Kiei: Bingo!!! But...wrong move missy
Soumei: Unbelievable!!! Very straightforward statement indeed...
Baruti Sensei: *remains silent for a while*.....
Baruti Sensei: Hmph..young people these days...
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Narrator: Meanwhile in the classroom...
Jiyuujin: *still in a state of shock* UUUOOH...
Soumei: This is awful... *both of them are worried about him*
Kiei: You got that right...
Soumei: That was quite a shock treatment isn't it?
Kiei: * complies to Soumei * Here...here...this is one of his weakpoints that's for sure
?: I'm the worst... *feeling depressed* Jiyuujin: AAAOOUUUH!!!
Soumei: No...it's ok. Don't worry about it...he'll be just fine...He will be back in no time for sure...
Kiei: *agrees to Soumei* Yup
?: But still... I apologize...I had no idea he had this kind of condition... * still feeling depressed *Narrator: Miscellaneous statements from the crew a.k.a comic developers...
Arden: Hi Ho! * greeting *
Mickey: Heey! * greeting *
Mark: HEHEHE * trying to haunt the author *
Author: * about to sleep * meet thy maker? zzzzz
?: * still feeling guilty about Jiyuujin * I know but...I just can't just stay put and do nothing about the situation...After all...it's my fault to begin with...I...I just want to show him how sorry I am for what I've done that makes him suffer
like this because of me...
Soumei and Kiei: * both thinking the same thing about
? * major drama queen!!! Soumei and Kiei: * agreed to help her * Alright! we'll help you...please standby...
Soumei: * thinking * Hmmm... * remains silent * .....
Kiei: * thinking too * Hmmmm... * remains silent * .....
Soumei: * Plan A: imagines
? cooling Jiyuujin's head by applying cold ice on his head to return back to normal...
?: Plan B: * has no on how to help Jiyuujin recover from his state * Kiei: Plan C: * being a naughty person today *
?: Oooh...please be gentle with me... * Jiyuujin once again... WHAAH!!! Hehehe...this is fun
?: *trying to calm down * * remains silent for a while *... I got to calm down...?: * feels relaxed * I think I'm ready now...I don't know what might cure his condition but...I have to do my best as I can...Narrator: The next picture is another strange scene indeed...the author added some extra characters which is an unknown mage summoning a ghost that appears out of nowhere...
It appears that the ghost somehow intentionally smashed a tennis ball towards
? and that's what happened... Oh and pls. note that they are both in cloak mode soin other words...They're obviously invisible... to the story
Soumei and Kiei: !!!! * saw an object going directly to
? * a ball??? ?: * :clueless as well and remains silent while she's on her way to comfort Jiyuujin * ?: * suddenly realizes she stepped on something * Eh ?: * about to loose balance * W-what the!!! Narrator: obviously the ball that
? is stepping on is making her loose balance and then... ?: * she accidentally slips and falls towards Jiyuujin while he is still at a shock condition * WH-WHOA!!! Narrator: this picture shows that Jiyuujin and
? both got collided by the impact?? Jiyuujin: * was back to normal but felt something soft from his face and thinking it was a...* Pillow?
?: * surprised but...* !!!!!Jiyuujin and
?:* both remained silent and...* Narrator: another of this is in the background... doom
Kiei and Soumei: *shocked* OH MY!!!
Jiyuujin: * as well * GASP!!!!!
?: OOPSIE... DO:
Jiyuujin: * ignores
? for a while and remains silent * ....?: * worried about Jiyuujin * Ummm...Jiyuujin: * still silent but suddenly smiles *
?: * wonders if she made Jiyuujin upset * I wonder if I did something wrong to make him feel this way...OOOH... ?: * surprised from the moment Jiyuujin placed his hand on her shoulders * WHAAAH!!! Jiyuujin: * giving her a warm smile *
?: what's he going to do with me??? Jiyuujin: * showing his gratitude for
? * I know you didn't mean to offend me a while ago but...I'm really grateful for cheering me up while I was at a state of shock...Thank you for worrying about me
?: * and here's what's on her mind...* that was unexpected... * responds to Jiyuujin *Oh! Uh...errr...no problem...
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Jiyuujin: * cheers up
?: Well...then enjoy studying here transferee... ?: * but gave Jiyuujin a warm smile too * Yeah!!! Narrator: Now Jiyuujin and
? temporarily part ways for now...Misc captions: Whoosh...Flutter
Narrator: This moment shocked his friends...
Kiei: W.W...WHAT JUST...
Soumei: Happened just now???
Somei: * what she thinks about Jiyuujin * he really changed a lot since we were new friends
back then...it's kinda strange because they are both strangers and they don't know each other that much but still...
Kiei: *fired up* Hmph...now this is getting to be interesting...I wonder what will happen to them
next time...
Narrator: On the first day of class...
Baruti Sensei: * greeting his fellow students * O H A Y O!!! (means goodmorning in Japanese)
Students: * all responds and greets Baruti Sensei but...* OHAYO Baruti Sempai
Baruti Sensei: * got * CALL ME SENSEI!!!
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Baruti Sensei: * about today's lesson * *Ehem* Now class...For today's lesson...you are all required to write a comprehensive story about yourself...
Baruti Sensei: * still * Well...since some of you students are new here in Rakeisha School...I welcome all of you for studying here and I hope that
you all enjoy life as a student in this school... Well... with today's lesson...It is fair enough for all of you to write something about your first experience about this
school...
Baruti Sensei: * confirms if the students understood his instructions for today's lesson * Is that clear my students?
Students: Affirmative Sir!!!
Baruti Sensei: * asks his students to do a roll call * Very well...Before you students all proceed
with your task...Please don't forget to introduce yourselves to our new students...You all know that
it is our custom to greet ourselves to others every beginning of class.....
Students: * complaining to Baruti Sensei..* Uh...Sir...do we have to? Oh...come on...sheesh...this
is a waste of time...
Baruti Sensei: :angry: GRRR...DO I HAVE TO JUDGE THY PUNISHMENT TO ALL OF YOU THE HARD WAY!!!
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Students: * from a moment at Baruti Sensei * Errr...No Sir...ALRIGHT CLASS!!! You heard our sensei...Please...identify yourselves alphabetically....Is that clear everyone...?
New students: Yes!!! Sempai!!!
Senior students: * noticed that there were four uninvited guests * Hey!!! those four on the top left corner are not permitted to attend class...
Narrator: * Explaining the names of the comic developers or staffs * Starting from the left...Chuck (author's nickname) Arden (a friend of mine) Mickey (my best friend) Mark (my bro bro )
Misc: dialogues coming from the crew...
Chuck: No way!!!
Arden: Sigh
Mickey: What the? Grrrrrr... badtrip
Mark: HEHEHE...I'LL HAUNT YOU DOWN FOR ETERNITY BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Senior Student: * of Mark * ACK!! Please have mercy...Forgive me but...I'm just following school policies...This was a direct order from our Sensei....P-Please don't haunt me for eternity...
Mark: * responds * I see...I'll let it slide this time...your lucky that your life is spared for now AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Senior Student: OK!! for the rollcall!!!!
Narrator: * note * extra character's appear in the comics at a random scene for some reason Hahaha isn't that fun or what?
Narrator: Here are the list of names of all students of Rakeisha School
Student#2: Begum
Student#3: Basuta
Student#5: Heiwa
Student#6: Jiyuujin
Student#7: Joui
Student#10: Kuro
Student#11: Kishi
Student#12: Koi
Narrator: More list of Students continued....
Student#8: Junsui
Student#9: Joshu
Student#13: Leia
Student#14: Muteki
Student#15: Otokomae
Student#16: Soumei
Student#17: Shiro
Student#4: Kiei
Narrator: *reads what's written on the monitor of the computer * Initializing data to the network system....Connecting data to Rakeisha School...Gathering all data profiles from present students in class E001...Proceeding analysis...
Narrator: Final roll call list
Student#18: Saikoubi
Student#19: Takaharu
Student#20: Tsutomu
Student#21: Kouki
finally Student# 1: Koshima
Students: * giving their comments to Baruti Sensei * But Sensei!!! Isn't Koshima not arranged alphabetically according to the student numbers? There must be some kind of mistake ....Should we rearrange the student numbers once again ...Or could you please explain to us the reason Sensei?
Baruti Sensei: Certainly...I'll tell you a story about the Koshima generation so listen carefully... *Ehem* Alright let's begin...
Baruti Sensei: Narrating the Koshima Generation... The Koshima Family consists of five generations...The 1st generation of the Koshima's are the founder of this school...There are countless drafts or sketches and blueprints of designing this school...Next, the 2nd generation of the Koshima finally concluded what structure design,models on what Rakeisha School will look like and finished building the whole school for several months later...And then, the third gen. of Koshima's gather and collaborated intellegence, made observations comparing other schools on what's best for concluding a better school policy for Rakeisha school...Also, the 4th gen. of Koshima established it's school's grand opening of this school...No one knows for certain for what happened to the owner of the 4th gen. Koshima...He just disappeared without a trace and was gone forever ...And finally, we were all that there was a last descendant of the Koshima's who is turned out to be a woman....All of the past generations of the Koshima were always a male gender....And now here we are in the present with the last Koshima generation...This is for certain a mystery for me on what will the last Koshima...
Narrator: Continued on the next page
Narrator: to the story...
Baruti Sensei: * continued...* await for our future...So now you all understand my fellow students...This is the reason why you must respect snd honor the name of the Koshima's because they have worked so hard for this school for generations...This is my reason and conclusion for all of you... Did I make myself clear?
Students: Yes!!! Sensei!!! Affirmative!!!
Baruti Sensei: GOOD!!! Well then...let's now proceed with our writing task as planned...After all you students are done writing for your statements about this school...You all are hereby permitted to take your breaktime...Is that clear everyone?
Students: YES SIR!!!!
Baruti Sensei: SHOBU!!! (begin in Japanese)
End of volume 1 Volume 2 is coming soon!!! So how's the story so far?
Here's my sneek peek for page 1 of volume 2 everyone!!! 
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Narrator: moving on to the story of season...All students from Rakeisha School are now working in progress for their comprehensive writing journal....Their first journal should at least take five minutes before times runs out before submitting it to their sensei...
What's written on the blackboard: Journal of the Day "Your first day of school. "
Time limit before sumission: five minutes
Begum: .........
Koshima: ........
Basuta: Hmph!!!
Heiwa: ..........
Joui: ........
Jiyuujin: ........
More fan arts and miscellanous stuffs updated as well!!!!
Enjoy!!!hehehe....I think I posted this artwork before but...oh well
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that will be all for my gallery update for today More art updates coming soon!!! See ya again sometime Take care everyone ;DDialogue order page 1:
Girl: Oh noo! *soccer ball falls towards the boy*
Boy: La....la...la *singing*
Soccer ball : Whoosh!!!!
*ball hits the boys head* Boink*
Boy: Owww!!
Boy:*starting to cry* sniff....
Boy: U U U WAH! *Girl approaches boy*
Boy: WHAAH! *Girl remains silent*
Girl: I...I'm sss..sorry
Boy: *silent and stares at the girl*
Dialogue order:
Girl: Um...excuse me...
Boy: Huh?
Girl: I...I'm sorry...I didn't mean to hurt you..
Gir: I know it's not much but...I hope this helps *girl immediately hugs the boy* Pain....pain..go away...la...la...la...la...
Boy: NYAAH!
Boy: *complimenting the girl* Umm...thank you...the pain's gone now....
Girl: No problem *girl giving him a warm smile*
Dialogue order:
Boy: *asking the girls name* Err...watz your name?
Girl: *apologizing to the boy and introducing herself* Oh...sorry, hehe...silly me...we haven't introduced ourselves yet....well my name is "LEIA YUUBI" * LEIA asking the boy's name* and you are?
Narrator: Playing arm wrestling
Boy: *revealing his name* my name is Jiyuujin Oruma
Leia: I see....it's nice to meet you Jiyuujin
Jiyuujin and Leia: *both laughing* Wahaha Nyahaha
Jiyuujin and Leia singing: LA LA LA LA LA LA
Leia: Well...I'm glad that your alright...Is the pain gone for good...? take care my friend
Jiyuujin: Take care my friend....I will miss you
Dialogue order:
Leia: *bidding farewell to Jiyuujin* Sayonara!!
Jiyuujin: *falls in love* hihi
Jiyuujin: *narrating his story* Ever since that day we've part ways....I had a thought in my mind when will I meet her again someday...It was a little moment from us to be friends...I really felt happy being with her...I felt comfort, love,happiness and at the same time...togetherness...I think Eventhough we're strangers.....somehow...I had this feeling within me that we've met somewhere before....
Narrator: 9 years later.....
Alarm clock: BOOO BOOYAH BWAAHAHA
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Jiyuujin: *Turns off the alarm clock* "CLICK"
Jiyuujin: *speaking in his thoughts* Hehehe...seriously...This alarm brightens my day for some reason...
Jiyuujin: *staring at the mirror* *remains silent for a while* Sparkling clean hehe...
: HEY YOU!!!Jiyuujin: * by the voice calling him out of nowhere* HAAAH?!!
: Breakfast is ready...don't take too long there ya? Jiyuujin: *replying to
* Alright...*speaking in his thoughts again* Hmph...that scared the heck out of me shouting out of nowhere...Oh well...I guess I have to groom myself then... DO:
Jiyuujin: *grooming himself* Ok!! Time to go
Narrator: *Note* Eating scene is skipped...
Narrator: Jiyuujin walks on his way to the subway station....*Riding the subway scene is also skipped* Now...the scene takes place at the park....
Narrator: Meanwhile at the park...
Jiyuujin: *had a strange feeling* What!!! *then he finally realize what he has done* Oh my....
Jiyuujin: *feeling guilty* This is bad
?: *suddenly laughs for no reason* AHAHAHA!!! Jiyuujin: !!!!! *surprised by
?*Jiyuujin: *Staring at
? and suddenly shouted...* WHOA! *to her*?: *wakes up from Jiyuujin's voice* Hmmmm..??: *greeting Jiyuujin and still on the situation* Uh...hi there...is there something wrong with my face?Jiyuujin: Umm...nope
Jiyuujin: *speaking in his thoughts again* I thought I was a gonner I...I was just hearing things that's all HAHAHA...*Jiyuujin sighs and calls it a close call but still feels guilty about it
Jiyuujin: *tells
? something before he leaves* Sss...Sorry but I got to go...See ya!!! ?: * still * Eh? ?: *thinking about Jiyuujin* Hmm...what a shy guy...although I admit that he has a charming side within him......Hihihi To be continued.....
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