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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 7, 2007 15:46:22 GMT -5
I was inspired by something I wrote. It made me think. I will work with this. Many people have been helping me. I would like everyone to help me. This is my big project. I want to show everyone that I can do something. I want people to review this. Even if you don't like it. Characters will enter every 10 pages.
This is Crystal Amy.
Please support me.
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Hero Island is a place of tranquility, peace, harmony. No-one dares harm it. This island is a place where the frail and sick can heal again and became healthy beings. Everyone is entitled to their own beliefs. Well almost everyone. Only one person cannot. That person is stuck. On top of Mt Mystico. She never gets freedom. She'd like it yes. But she never gets it. Life can get too much at times. She has it piling up.She never spends time doing what she loves.
She is always stuck at the peak of there. She opened her eyes. She sighed. "Life never gets easy" She laid back on the concrete. It was cold and made her jump. She made a crystal ball in her hand and threw it down the stairs of the altar. She sped quickly to the bottom then back up with the ball. She threw it again. She did this several times over then got bored. "Life never gets easy!" She whined. Her voice echoed. "sigh" She walked up the stairs. She laid on her side and fell down the stairs. She was so bored she had resorted to that. (>_>) She stood there. Staring into space. Something had to happen didn't it?
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lol I know..but I'd like reviews and I'd like people to support me.
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Post by Tymki on Jul 7, 2007 15:58:54 GMT -5
Very good. I liked seeing it from the guardian's point of view. Cooped up at the top of Mount Mystico.
Lol.
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Jul 7, 2007 17:34:22 GMT -5
Hey, I love it. ^_^ You're right, it's gotta get dull up there. XD
Not to mention lonely, and unfair, huh?
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 8, 2007 1:55:09 GMT -5
Yep...Crystal Amy just sits there and never gets to go some where or anything
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 8, 2007 2:16:19 GMT -5
woot.  . ------------------------------------- Crystal Amy stared out over the island. It was large yes, but she had claustrophobia, so the big island was a plus. The girl walked to the edge of Mt Mystico's peak. There was a big piece of rock that over stuck. She walked along it quickly. She squinted as she saw smoke coming from the village. "There's a fire!" She said shocked. "Crystal Warp" She said quickly. She found herself at the fountain, marking the middle. There was fire blazing from a person's house. She rushed over there. "Miss please my child is in there" A Hero Islander spoke frantically. Amy walked up to the window and smashed it. She climbed in and went into the firey haze. She walked carefully over wooden floorboards eluding the fire. "Hey I'll crystalize the fire" She took a deep breath then blew. Crystal shards scattered everywhere, clinging to the fire. The fire was eventually frozed in place. The girl took a left up the stairs, tripping on a loose floor board. She regained her composure and travelled up the rest of the stairs. She looked in every room until she found a little child holding a sleeping baby. "Hang on I'll save you" C.A called to the girl. C.A waded through the fire gaining a few burns. She picked up the girl and smashed the window she was next to. Crystal Amy then stood on the frame and jumped out safely. The mother ran to her children and Amy. "Thank you so much what could I ever do to repay you" She said in a gracious manner "Nothing" 'much' She thought the last bit. "Here take this egg". A shiny blue egg was handed to C.A "What does it hatch?" C.A asked. "You'll find out in due time" She responded. C.A had the egg held firmly in her hands. "Hmmm...I bet you hatch a chicken....or it's those russian doll thingys with the a doll in side the next and they get smaller" C.A assumed. Shee put her ear to the egg. She heard nothing "Well I'll have to wait then." She was the top steps of the altar. The egg was floating in one of the two ponds outlining the path. "Well it works as a good buoyancy aid" She sweat-dropped. She stepped down and sat at the bottom step to take a better look "Maybe it hatchs the god of chao" C.A dismissed this idea "Well I'll find out in due course" |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2007 8:14:36 GMT -5
This is really good in fact I love it.^_^
Please continue when you wish.
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 8, 2007 8:18:48 GMT -5
lol is it?
I dunno I would like ppl to support me. ^^
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2007 8:22:30 GMT -5
Well I support you all the way, and I'm sure taht everyone else with. |
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 9, 2007 10:40:05 GMT -5
Here comes the next part
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Crystal Amy was walking down the dirt path through the forest. She had the egg in her arms not oo tight but not too loose.
"Ok I'll take you to the doctors to find out what you are then if you're a chao then I'll go to the chao supplies store"
Amy made it to the village promptly and quickly. It was buzzing with life, people coming in and out of shops. People sitting on the rim of the central fountain. A general happy vibe and aura. Crystal Amy smiled at this. She liked it when everyone was happy. She headed towards the small hospital and pushed open the doors. She walked up to reception "Urm..excuse me Could I see a doctor about this egg?" She held the egg up for the secretary to see "Oh yes of course...down the corridor..take a left, first on the right" She told the girl
"Thank you" C.A walked down the corridors.
She made to the room. It said the doctors name on the door. Crystal Amy knocked then entred upon hearing acceptance. "Ah Amy, what would you like me to do for you?" The doctor asked
"I'd like you to examine this egg...I wanna know what will hatch from this" Amy gave him the egg. The doctor placed it on the patient bed and them put his stephoscope on it. He listened to it through two earpieces. "Hmm" He took the the pieces out of his ear and took the other bit away too. He gave the egg back to Amy. "It's a chao egg" He said simply
"WOW A CHAO!" Amy said excitedly
"Yes a chao, and by the colour of the egg, I'd say it'll be shiny blue" He added
"How long will it take to hatch?" Amy questioned
"Oh about 1 month" He answered
"Ok" The girls spirits were dampened
"If you take care of it though it may be a shorter length of time though" He continued.
"Ok Dr." She exited his room. 'wow a chao egg' She looked down at the egg
Amy had exited the hospital "Now chao supplies" She quickly found the store. She ran over to it and opned the bell. It triggered a ringing sound. A yound lady with a bandana over her hair came out from the back "Hello may I help you" She said in a sweet manner. "I want some chao stuff for my chao"
"Can I see your chao?" Crystal Amy put her egg on the counter.
"Oh it's not born" She was shocked
"I want to get stuff before it hatches" Crystal Amy explained
"Ok what would you like?" She asked
"Urm...wow what are they?"
"These are chao fruit" She told C.A while going over to them
"Can I have a couple please"
"Of course" Two chao fruit were taken from the shelf and put on the counter beside the egg.
"Urm..errr...that...what's that?"
"This is a small basket that your chao can sleep in" She explained
"Ok I want that too" The basket was put on the counter
"Ok that's 9 crysalanians" Crystal Amy handed her the correct amonut and take her stuff then exited the shop.
C.A was back on Mt Mystico with her egg. She placed the basket near The Ice Emerald and placed the fruit in front of it. The Egg went in the comfy, soft basket. Amy sat on the top step, she sighed longly. "I so can't wait for that egg to hatch." She smiled and looked at the clouds go by slowly.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2007 15:12:15 GMT -5
Cool! CHAOS MERCHANDISE! Thats awsome, please continue when you are ready.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2007 16:33:57 GMT -5
very good story, i like it. lots of action, and thats good. and its got solid sonic material. i like it!
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 10, 2007 1:45:43 GMT -5
lol thanks...I know who's coming when out of new characters and how they're gonna tie in with C.A lol
Thank you everyone
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 13, 2007 12:31:54 GMT -5
ok next part I guess...  ----------------------------------------- Amy was sitting at the bottom step of the shrine. It had happened. She once again was bored. "I find something to do then I get bored again, why can't that egg hatch?" C.A stood up and walked along the path that went on the inside of the two little lakes on either side. When she looked up at the egg she found no egg. "WHAT THE!..MY EGG!" She screamed. She looke round the shrine to find it. Round the back. On top of the Ice Emeralds shelter. In the pools but no dice. It was nowhere. "Why didn't I guard it?" Amy said depressed. "I'll ask the villagers" She used crystal warp to get to the bottom of the mountain. GThen proceeded through the forest making sure to look around for the shiny blue egg. Amy had been looking around for 4 hours now and still couldn't find the egg. A bush rustled behind her. She turned that way. "Come out" She ordered. It didn't come out. Instead it ran back towards the base of the mountain. "Hey come back here!" Amy shouted. She came to the base of the mountain. She couldn't see where the thing had gone to. She leant against the mountain until suddenly she fell into the mountain. She was on the inside, it was pitch black too. "Crystal Flash" Amy whispered. The light shone from her hand like a searchlight allowing her to see. She walked down the path that was in front of her slowly. She came to another door. She heard laughing behind it. "I tell ya boss that kid up on the top sure don't look after her egg and stuff, swiping this baby was easy" The voice sounded familiar. "Good job Robbie this egg will sell loads at the crysalan market tomorrow" A deeper gruff voice replied. Crystal Amy thought now was the time to make her entrance. She pushed the rock forwards and it swiffeled around. "Give back my egg you four theifs" Amy announced The four craned their necks round "Not on your life, we are the Stealian, we don't give back what we steal" One of the crew members snapped "I would if I were you" Amy grew a evil grin as she made a crystal ball in her hand. Spikes grew off it slowly. She threw it at them and it exploded enveloping them in a black smoke. Amy made a grab for the egg and got out of there quickly. She ran up the path and pushed the hidden door open. "AFTER HER!" the boss roared. "Right boss" the three replied. They all dashed after Amy. Amy had gotten into the forest far enough for them not to catch her. The egg had taken a few scratches and dents but it was still alright "Oh are you ok little egg." She stroked the egg lovingly. (  ) "Lets go you like that?" She used Crystal warp and found herslef on the top of the mountain again. She placed the egg in the basket and then took her place on the top step again. |
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Post by Tymki on Jul 21, 2007 4:03:40 GMT -5
Yay, Amy lost and found the egg!
Carry on whenever you feel like it.
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Post by CS Revolked on Jul 21, 2007 14:18:43 GMT -5
I know I can't do this but
TOPIC LOCKED!
ALL MY TOPICS LOCKED EVERYTHING I POSTED IN LOCKED!
I AM NOT MAKING ANOTHER RPG NO MORE STORIES!
NO MORE NOTHING....I TRY BUT NO-ONE DARES READ WHAT I WRITE....I TRY I TRY TO UPDATE BUT NO IT'S SM'S WE CAN'T GO NEAR THAT CAN WE?
I'LL POST ON SOME ONE ELSE I'LL POST ON A STAFF MEMBERS
I WON'T POST ON SM'S COZ SHE'S JUST A MEASLY STUPID MEMBER...SHE CAN'T DO ANYTHING CAN SHE?!
WELL I CAN....I'M GONNA STICK UP FOR MYSELF AND SAY THIS....DELETE ALL MY POSTS DELETYE ALL MY CHARACTERS...DELETE YOUR MEMORIES OF ME!
I AM NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO BE IN YOUR MEMORIES
I AIN'T GOOD ENOUGH FOR NO-ONE AM I?!
thanks...for nothing
SM15...Mystico93...Amy.
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) "Lets go you like that?" She used Crystal warp and found herslef on the top of the mountain again. She placed the egg in the basket and then took her place on the top step again.