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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 7, 2007 2:24:16 GMT -5
ok, it's obvious you're confused, Spear woke up when he splashed water on his face, normally to wake Spear up, you have to dash him with water so the water woke him up, Spear is prone to have dreams and he feels that he is in the dream, like he's been sucked inside. and the cat is reference to my own cat coz mine is a persian. and is like the one in there apart from the evil part with the scratching, Mine is too docile for my liking. anyway. Yes, Knuckles was sleeping on the sofa so Rouge had nowhere to sleep, so she thought that it wouldn't mind, Spear had been out for the three days. Spear woke up and went to get water coz it helps him see in the dark,coz he's got an excess of Vitamin A. So anyway yeah now the following is no dreaming. And as you can see Shadow did something to Sonic that is very bad, no not ya know, it will be revealed in the next chapter
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Post by Tymki on Jun 9, 2007 4:06:51 GMT -5
Very cool so far, Harnettian! Carry on when you feel like it!
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 9, 2007 5:09:53 GMT -5
Yay I will which chappie's next? Chapter 6 or 7
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Post by Tymki on Jun 9, 2007 12:58:34 GMT -5
It's chapter 7, Harnettian.
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 9, 2007 15:27:39 GMT -5
I can't even remember myself now....so yeah tomoz is the next chappie
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 10, 2007 7:53:27 GMT -5
ok in about 4 hours I'll post the next chapter of 'The Darkness Within' k folks
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Jun 11, 2007 0:47:45 GMT -5
Gracious... This has jumped since I was last here! XD Well, in no time at all, you'll have 60-page stories or more like me then! Hee hee, I love long stories, don't you? ;]
Carry on! ^_^
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 11, 2007 14:48:16 GMT -5
I kinda forgot so sorry...anyway. Yes I will post more but I am kinda busy for the while. So plz bear with me. I am gonna plan the next chappie since it is gonna be INCREDIBLY long too ,long to be honest but yeah post and see what you think
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 12, 2007 10:46:17 GMT -5
:D ok it's coming. This will be cool so hold on to your hats. Myst makes a cameo.
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[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 7[/glow]
Spear awoke next morning to find Rouge was not in the bed. He went into the living room/Kitchen and sat on the sofa. He switched it on and started flicking through numerous channels. He settled with Chao Race Grand Final. "Mystico, hey, well I want him to win. He's the favourite anyway" Spear watched with intent as the commentator was outlining the course and saying what skill was needed where. Spear got up and went to the alcove where the little kitchen was. He opened the fridge and took out a banana. He strolled back over to the sofa all the while peeling the skin off. He chucked the skin in the bin "Yes direct hit" he congratulated himself for getting the skin in the bin at over 7 feet. He ate it, sometimes it slipping out onto the floor, but Spear just picked it up and started eating again. Spear settled as the race was about to start. All the chao were eager. A clackson went off and all the chao dashed out off the rainbow paths to the solid ground. A couple of chao fell over which made tornado-shapes abover their heads but they got up and kept running. Mystico was well ahead of the group making it to the climbing rock leading to the trees "C'mon Mystico!" Spear cheered.
Spear was in the bathroom taking a shower. The race had finished and they were going on about how tight and tense it was. Spear was soaking his fur under the showerhead. Making his quills droop down, and have drip-tips at the end.
Spear was walking around rubbing the moist wetness out from his quills. When he stopped they pinged up and rebounded a bit. Spear walked into the bedroom casually to see his clothes set out neatly with a white envelope. Spear slid his jeans on, followed by his shirt which he did two of the middle buttons up. He picked up the envelope and tore at the seal. He noticed a little hedgehog head covering it. He took the letter out and saw that th paper was black and it was written in blood. (scary O_O)
Spear was instantly taken aback by the writing and how it dripped onto his hand and it tricled down the paper. Spear quickly read it before it was impossible. It said "HELLO SPEAR THE HEDGEHOG, I HAVE CAPTURED ROUGE AND SONIC, ROUGE MORE IMPORTANTLY. IF YOU WANT TO SEE THEM AGAIN GO TO THE WAREHOUSE ON THE OUTSKIRTS OF WESTOPOLIS, I'LL BE WAITING.
YOURS SINCERELY
SHADOW THE HEDGEHOG' then a little chaos emerald by the name
Spear ripped up the piece of paper and started trashing the room making things fly and get tipped over. "HOW DARE HE THAT LITTLE FREAK HEDGEHOG!" Spear raged, he felt his anger override him. His fur turned a little darker silver. Plasmatic energy flowed around him. His aura was coloured a light neon blue. He stomped out the room slamming the door. he then opened the window and jumped out. It wasn't that high. "SHADOW, YOUR DEATH WILL BE CERTAIN!!!!!!!!!" he bellowed loudly making an echo. Dogs sounded all around the area barking madly and howling. Spear rushed to the outskirts, hoping Rouge and Sonic, more importantly Rouge would be alright "I promise Rouge, I'll save you and kill taht furball" he muttered. A tear coming from his eye an being swept way by the intense wind.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jun 14, 2007 10:39:16 GMT -5
Technically... I'm not sure if Shadow would do this sorta stuff. He'd kinda see himself as being too powerful to need to prove himself. ... But, this is not my story, and it is still totally awesome! Great work dude!  |
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 14, 2007 10:52:14 GMT -5
ohhhh...sorry.......Did IO do something wrong..but what he does..is I'M NOT TELLING YOU!!!!!
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Jun 15, 2007 0:30:43 GMT -5
Well, I like it. I mean, it's kinda fun to mix up even original char's attitudes.
And, now it's obvious that Shadow has a plan. XD YAY! lol
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 15, 2007 10:54:59 GMT -5
one word or maybe two..evil. hedgehog.
It might get sad but...well nevermind..you'll love the next chapter..it'll be a real shocker.
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Post by CS Revolked on Jun 15, 2007 13:48:30 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 8[/glow]
Spear rushed avoiding all the people. He had to get there quick. Spear had an image branded in his mind. It was of Rouge on the floor dead and lifeless "Please don't let that happen" Spear pleaded. He saw the warehouse over the horizon. It was black and Shadow's head was on it. "The evil thing" Spear said calmly keeping his composure.
Spear was outside the gate that bordered the warehouse where Shadow was keeping Rouge and Sonic. Spear took a couple of steps back, then launched himself over the gate in one almighty jump. He narrowly missed the fence. Spear crouched as he saw two burly looking hedgehog guards come towards him. Spear ducked behind a couple of barrels and kept still. H overheard some talking between them two. "Hey Master Shsdow said that he was gonna kill one of them..the bat I think..the hedgehog is worthless to him." One said
"Yeah or he'll kill both of them" the other one responded. They walked out of sight. Spear stood up and dashed to the warehouse's big steel doors. Spear peeked in and saw Shadow facing them both with his back turned. Rouge was tied to a chair and she was gagged. Sonic was tied to a chair too but he wasn't gagged though. Shadow went away to a door near the left of the building. Spear pushed the door open, struggling. He dashed to Rouge who made a muffled cheer and plea for help
"I knew you'd come" Shadow was in the shadows his eyes illuminated. "Now I'm gonna let you witness the girls.." a slight chuckle "DEATH" he made Chaos enegy and then directed it at Rouge "But I'll give you a choice, either Rouge dies. OR SONIC DIES" at that moment. Spear heart felt like a stained glass window that had just been smashed. Everything went black and he stared. Trying to verify what he had to do. "I wha.." Spear turned around. Sonic was pulling at the ropes trying to get free and Rouge stared at him. Scared and waiting for an answer. "I CAN'T!" Spear shouted. He turned with vicious look in his eyes. If looks could kill. Shadow would be dead instantly. "How could you" Spear growled. He lunged for Shadow who side-stepped out the way. Spear crashed along the ground "Choose Spear, 20 seconds to make your decision or I'll choose for you" Shadow had a evil contentment in his eyes, like that he liked what he was putting Spear through. "Times up!" Shadow pointed the Chaos Spear at Sonic.
"No, please Shadow spare me please!" Sonic edged backwards scared that his life would be taken. Spear rushed towards the hedgehog hoping he could make Shadow fall off guard and shoot somewhere else. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" The Chaos Spear plunged right into Sonic's heart. Shadow laughed maniacally as blood poured down from the hole in Sonic's body. Shadow undid the ropes and Sonic's body fell to the floor immediately. It laid there making a blood pool. Spear felt anger override him. He couldn't take it. Spear's eyes turned a darker blue than before. His fur turned a deeper and thicker silver and his orange highlights lost their glow and they too went darker. Spear's light neon blue aura started again but rapidly surrounding and waving around Spear's body. It quickened it's pace. Shadow stopped laughing and then started to run quickly activating his air shoes. Spear sped through the air. Cutting off Shadow's path and delivering a destructive blow to the obsidian's head.
Roug looked at Sonic's body gradually making tears in her eyes
"SOOOOOOOOOOOONIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIC!" She mustered up all her voice in one loud shout.
Suddenly, sirens were heard outside. Spear was giving Shadow a severe beating punching and kicking him everywhere. Shadow kicked Spear sending him back. The killer hedgehog used this time to escape. Which he did. Spear released Rouge when the police came in. They scurried over and checked out Sonic. They soon realised he was dead.
They were talking to Spear about what happened. He told them everything. The police were shocked when they heard that Shadow was the person who commited this. Rouge was sitting in a police car drinking some warm tea. She was still shocked about what happened. Sonic was placed in a bag and wheeled off to a morgue. Where they would check to see how he died.
Spear walked to Rouge. Rouge set her tea down and hugged Spear tightly. He vowed revenge on Shadow. He would never forget that awful day where Sonic the hero hedgehog died tragically
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jun 15, 2007 14:32:32 GMT -5
Woah.  Dramatic. Dang, that's tragic. Amy's gonna be crushed... And Shadow's gonna be crushed when Amy gets her hands on him. Crushed by a large hammer. And Tails is gonna be crushed too. And Eggman. I mean, he's got no rival anymore. Life just... Won't be the same... Right more when you want to. I'll play an appropriate fulneral music. *Plays Sonic 1 GAME OVER music* And worst of all, he had no continues!  Anyhow, write more when you wanna Mystico! |
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