A tale of S.O.R.R.O.W

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Chapter 1:


A lone figure dressed in a black trench coat and black uniform-like clothing walked down the desolate streets of Serpentaria. He walked past the poisoned, dead bodies without emotion. He had an ornate sword with five jewels in the hilt strapped to his back and two holstered guns attached to his belt as well as other equipment. His piercing silver eyes were blind to the destruction and focused on a building in the distance whilst his long black hair blew about in the wind. As he reached the building he pulled out some C4 explosives and places them at the base of the building before continuing to walk. He was Project S.O.R.R.O.W and that is what he was designed to cause. He was artificially created by the military as the ultimate weapon, but a malfunction caused him to awaken violently. A massive power surge was caused by his awakening and thus the lab was destroyed. All that was left was rubble, Sorrow and a white eagle military jet, which was parked about 200ft out of the explosions range. It was this jet, piloted by Sorrow, which had fired the poisonous gas bombs that had killed the city. They were dead within minutes yet Sorrow showed no remorse. The body used for the experiments had all of its weaker emotions like love and sadness sealed away leaving only hatred, anger, vengeance, and pity. Even they were not shown very often. The only thing he showed seemed to be a smirk whenever he destroyed something or did something that a mere human would be incapable of. He walked down the streets dropping C4 at irregular intervals. As he dropped a piece his sharp ears heard the click of a gun’s trigger and he dived into a roll pulling out his gun as he did. He smirked as he saw fifty bullets hit where he had just been standing.
“Pitiful creatures.” He said before aiming and firing off eight bullets, four from each gun, in the direction of the attackers. He heard cries of anguish and pain and smirked again before heading over to where the cries came from. He looked at the bodies and saw bullet holes in either the head or the chest. “Ten Beastarian soldiers killed in eight bullets. These are Beastaria’s finest? They are pathetic scum.” With that he walked out of the city placing C4 as he did so still at irregular intervals. Once 100ft away from the city he drew his sword before aiming the five foot long blade one handed at the city and tapping the emerald in the hilt. As he did a signal was sent off to the C4 and they exploded causing the city to slowly crumble till only rubble remained. “That city was full of weak points. It was easy to destroy. Not one person that the military sent stood against me evenly. Pathetic. Can no-one stand against the might of Sorrow?” With that he sheathed his sword and kept walking that same question running through his brain. Was there anyone in the world who could fight him and win? It was a few seconds alter when he heard the distinctive whir of a helicopter. He looked out of the corner of his eye expecting to see a military helicopter, but instead he saw a news helicopter and smirked. He slid out his gun aimed at the helicopter and fired. He watched as the helicopter span out of control until it crashed and exploded killing all the people on board. “Hopefully that will send out a message to heroes around the world.” He walked over to a piece of metal from the helicopter and placed his hand above it. A flash of light surrounded it and when it faded a jet black motor bike stood in its place. He unsheathed his sword and tapped the ruby in the hilt and the sword shrunk to the size of a key. He sat on the bike and inserted the sword into the keyhole and rode off into the distance wondering if anyone could destroy him.

[FlameMaster5]

Oooooo... I like! ^_^ I LIKE A LOT!!

Awesome beginning, Blaze. I think the ideas you've chosen suite you, most definitely. A writer must discover what they're best at writing, what particular taste is their strong point. I think you've found it at last, my friend! Good luck and I'll try coming by whenever I can.

By the way, I know he's evil, but Sorrow is the kind of character I LOVE. This rocks! :]

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Thanks fm5. well you've seen the bad guy i guess it's time to introduce the good guys.
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Meanwhile on an island out to sea, one of the few people who did not know of Sorrow's destruction was loungin on the beach wearing nothing tanning his well tone body without a single tan line. Over his eyes were a pair of red sunglasses. He leapt up disturbed by the sound of an approaching helicoptor. He sighed and grabbed the bracelet that lay next to him. Slipping it onto his wrist he tapped the saphhire encrusted into it. A glow began to surround his body and when it faded he was wearing a tight sleeveless unifrom like top and a matching pair of bottoms both a sapphire blue. On the left side of his chest was a silver crescent moon and on his hands were a pair of black fingerless gloves. Around his waist was a silver belt with a saphhire encrusted silver belt buckle with a gun holstered in it as well as a katana sheathed on the other side.

"Darn military." he said quietly. "They always drop in when your in the middle of something." He knew it was a miliitary helicoptor because only military class vehicles could enter through the special invisble energy shield around the island without being fired on by the turrets tat were hidden around the island. He made a hand signal to a female lying on the beach for her to follow and she nodded. She too slid on a bracelet, but instead of tapping a sapphire she tapped an emerald and a uniform similar to his appeared over her nude body except it was emerald green and the symbol (this time on the right side of the chest) was a golden wind symbol.

"Military again?" She sighed. "Just when i was starting to relax too." She too wore black fingerless gloves and a blet with a holstered gun and sheathed katana." "Seems they deal with their own problems can they crest?" Crest smirked and rubbed the back of his shoulder length messy blue hair. He looked up at the descending helicopter with his silver eyes.

"It looks that way Breeze." Crest replied to the long green haired, golden eyed love. She smiled. "And we didn't even get to add to out tans." They both laughed and walked up the stairs of the helipad. On the helipad was a military silver falcon battle coptor and standing by it was a man dressed in smart military uniform. His striped donated him as a lieutenant-general and the crest on his chest told them he was from Beastaria the largest and msot advanced city on Planet Angelosia. It was located on the most powerful conitnent in the world Drakthor.

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Heh, it's looknig good so far.

[FlameMaster5]

I agree. ^_^

Poor Crest, poor Breeze. Just when they were relaxing too!
Being a hero can be really rough, you know? XD
Continue when you wish!

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I have the stuff handwritten to continue this, but i think i'll let you wait for the update. Heh it should be quite good once i updated it.

[FlameMaster5]

That's fine, Blaze. Take your time. ^_^
I'll be reading whenever possible, ok? :]

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“Breeze, Crest I am sorry to bother you, but Beastaria and the rest of the world needs your help. Beastaria’s latest and most advanced weapon was unleashed during a computer malfunction.” The lieutenant-general began. “He is codenamed Porject S.O.R.R.O.W and he had killed hundreds of people ,most of which were citizens, and demolished Serpentaria.” Crest thought for a moment.
“They are giving weapons gender now?” he wondered before asking a question that Breeze was also wondering. “Just what is this weapon?”
“It is our ultimate weapon.” The Beastarian replied. “A genetically altered super soldier who is designed to be unstoppable.” At this point the decided to formally ask them what he had been ordered to ask. “Beastaria believes you two maybe the only ones who have a chance of stopping him. Will you help us?” The two islanders looked at each other and nodded.
“Of course we will, It’s been awhile since we had a proper challenge.” Breeze said. “Yet I have a question for you. Have you sent in military vehicles against Sorrow?” The lieutenant -general smirked satified with the level of her intuition.
“A strike force is currenly on the way to intercept him.” he said. “My orders were to come and obtain your assitance because whislt Sorrow was being tested he demolished all our vehicles with just his sword.” Both grimaced and nodded. This was going to be a challenge.
“We will make our own way there.” Crest said. “Tell your superiors we will soon soon join the battle and to try and keep Sorrow pinned down till we get there. Don’t put yourselves at risk just try to slow him down.” Crest smirked. “We will handle Sorrow. Just slow him down.” The lieutenant-general nodded and ascended into the helicopter. After a few moments it took off and headed off into the distance. Whilst it flew the Beastarian began relaying the advice from Crest to his superior officers at B.O.M.B (Beastarian Official Military Base). Yet the Beastarian soldier knew they might as well have been orders because the heads of the Beastarian army and most armies of the world followed the strategic advice of the mysterious duo. Together they were the most skilled tacticians on the planet. Crest’s strongest point was naval warfare and his weakest was air. Breeze was the opposite. Land warfare their combined strategic knowledge was twice as good as anyone else on the planet. Breeze made up for Crest’s poor air strategy and Crest made up for Breeze’s poor naval strategy. In simple together they were the best people to go to for strategy. Unfortuantely, they very rarely gave out advice unless it suited them. As the advice was received orders were sent out to the strike force to just slow S.O.R.R.O.W down. Due to Beastaria unique island formation a naval craft could get almost anywhere if it knew how to naviagte the complicated maze of waterways and if it had permission to enter through the 10 ft thick Titanium walls placed at strategic points. They also issued orders for the strike force to be strengthened ten fold. The heads of Beastaria Militia knew a mission against this particular enemy was suicide, but they also knew Crest and Breeze were probably the only ones who could stop him. They had to trust the two heroes judgement.

Meanwhile the two heroes walked down to the beach and into a dense piece of woodland. They arrived at a large boulder a few minutes later and tapped their bracelet’s gems and the boulder split in two revealing a tunnel. They descended the winding staircase and arrived in their underground hangar. As they left the stair case the entrance sealed and light switched on revealing many aircraft and sea craft as well as many cases full of weapons, ammo and other equipment. They each grabbed a second belt which strapped diagonally across their chests and loaded the pouches with pistol and rifle ammo. They then grabbed a rifle and strapped it onto the back of the belt. Walking along the row of vehicles they stopped at two. One was a gold serpent fighter jet and the other was a leviathan fighter boat. They smirked and leapt into their chosen vehicle. Crest in the leviathan and Breeze in the gold serpent. Tapping their gems again the vehicles were lifted towards the ceiling which opened out onto the beach. Once they were fully above ground they pressed the ignition buttons and shot off over the seas towards Beastaria. Both vehicles were propelled by powerful nova thrusters that allowed them to reach speeds of over 10,000 mph. Beastaroa was 15,000 miles away so they knew at max speed it would take an hour and a half to get there, but they also hoped Project S.O.R.R.O.W would not be able to move too much if he was pinned down and that they would get their before too many got hurt. They knew, however, that S.O.R.R.O.W could cutdown these troops and vehicles with just his sword. They knew that it meant the sword was made of Draganium the rarest and most densest metal on the planet, it was ten times stronger then titanium. They knew it was going to take all they had to defeat this foe.

Meanwhile S.O.R.R.O.W was riding over the flatlands towards the next major city in Beastaria. It was named Falconair. He looked at the key to his bike. It was the shrunk down version of his sword. He stroked the hilt. “All swords need a name and I shall call you Severance for you sever anything that stands in my way.”

[FlameMaster5]

Lookin' awesome, Blaze. I like Crest, Breeze and Sorrow.
It's cool to see chars go against each other and form relationships--of ANY sort!
It'll be a trial facing Sorrow, though, that's for sure!

Continue when you wish! ;]

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hehe you have no idea. I eidted my previous pos becuase i thought of a better way to write it. I also added a new bit to the end. Sorrow had named his sword. Sorrow's severance the most powerful sword on Waranthia or is it?

[FlameMaster5]

Interesting. ^_^
Well, continue when you wish.
Looks like trouble ahead!

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I will indeed i got it in my head and it is awesome it jsut putting it into text.

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Awsum story, keep up the good work!!!!!

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Breeze was first to land on the hard ground 20ft from the river that was, according to the radio message they received earlier, approximately five miles south of S.O.R.R.O.W’s current location. Once she had disembarked from her vehicle she tapped her wrist ban and the jet transformed into two smaller vehicles. One was a small fast sports car and the other was a small tank. She knew a tank would be of no use against her foe and she also knew speed was of the essence and so she climbed into the sports car. It was emerald green like her uniform and more then it appeared. She tapped her wristband again and the tank transformed into a small plane and flew into the sky above the clouds and activated its cloaking device. She waited and watched as the Leviathan used it’s boosted to boost onto the ground and came to a stop next to her. Crest tapped a button installed in the Leviathan and it transformed into a sports car as well. Due to its much smaller size there were no spare parts to form a second vehicle like Breeze’s did so he did not have to send a second vehicle anywhere. He looked at Breeze’s pale green sports car which excluding the colour was identical to his pale blue one.
“You ready Breeze?” he asked through the radio link between their cars. He slid off his bracelet and placed it in the slot on his dash board and his engine started.
“What do you think?” Breeze replied as she started her car in the same way. Crest smirked.
“Let’s roll.” Crest and Breeze both hardenend their faces as they drove off towards S.O.R.R.O.W's location at approximately 60 miles per hour. At this pace it would take them roughly five minutes to get to their destination. The battle was about to begin.

[CS Revolked]

lol. I love this Blaze. Keep it up.

Crest and Breeze sound like cool characters.

Is Brutal Terra making an entrance? I like him the most. Out of your characters.

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Brutal erra is a sonic style character. If i can edit him into a human character then yes he might do. Until i think of a way for that to happen no. Hmmmmmmmmm.........there are a few characters that could have his attributes and maybe other chaos demons. Infact i could have seven of them...................perfect. This should be.........interesting.