Blade of Malice

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This story hopefully will not link to any book, game or anime i have ever watched though it will feature Blaze as a dragon knight thoguh in this he wields a spear and a whip and Striker though he is renamed Doreiku and is a theif not a shadow warrior. He uses a dagger and a short sword. Raijin is however the main character though he is not a shinigami. He is just an average 14 year old boy who finds a sword. The enemy is the evil Strothian Empire.


I\m going to start this soon

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Looks rather nice but I'm gonna point out any thing that can be linked to any thing else. In fact about every word in that post can be linked to lord of the rings or some Anime I've never watched. And blaze weilding a spear and whip obviously is a reference to a balrog but just with a spear.

Ok now that I'm done having fun I'll be watching intently.

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No i jsut always wanted a character with a spear and i sora was doodling a cool whip. Anwyay i had to reupload cover as i don't want my real name to be known. Excepty James i'm ok with that.]
theres my cover.
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my bad

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no prob dude. I will psot wha i done tomoz. which will be even more.

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Chapter 1:
A young 14 year old boy wearing Japanese style robes was wandering the large town of shadia looking for his friends. He had messy blonde hair and bluey grey eyes. His robes were black and he tied them together with a leather belt. Over the top of this he wore a very dark yellow robe with silver lightning bolt marks at the bottom. On his feet he wore comfortable sandles and thin white socks. He was palying hide and seek.






Meanwhile a man wearing ninja clothing was leaping across rooftops carryin a sword in his hands. It’s sheath was gold encrusted leather and the handle was silver. On each side of the hilt was an emerald. He smirked as he leapt over an alley.

“I have the silver sword. Finally I got it.” he whispered. He turned his head to look behind him and gasped. The ninja squad of the Shadian police force were chasing him. “Darn. I can’t let them have this back. Even if I can’t sheath it then I can’t let them have it.” As he leapt across an alley he dropped the sword and kept running. “I will escape.”

“No you won’t.” said a voice and then a figure jumped out from another alley at him and fired a dart at him. As it hit it sent an electric shock through him stunning him. “I got you at last Doreiku.” the figure added as Doreiku became unconscious. He pointed to two of the ninja police. “Engasheki, Jeimuzu take him to the holding cell. Make sure he is unarmed and bind him.” he ordered. The two indicated Ninja’s leapt forward and lifted the man onto their shoulders then leapt away rapidly. “The rest of you are dismissed. Once they left the commander of the ninja squad headed off towards the museam where the sword was stolen from.

“I guess I’ve got to tell them the news.” he whispered sadly. “The sword is gone, but the theif who stole it is captured.”






As the ninja squad commander leapt off towards the museam the young boy was heading through an alley hoping to find one of his friends hiding there. What he did find surprised him. On the floor was a sword in a gold encrusted sheath. He stared at it and lifted it up. As he touched it the emeralds began to glow and so did his eyes. He stared at the sword sheath in surprise as a sword belt extended from it. It surprised him so much that he dropped the sword, but both his eyes and the emeralds did not stop glowing. He bent down and picked up the sword and tied the belt round his waist and went to walk off, but as he did he tripped over and realized the sword was too long for him to have it dangling from his waist so instead he attached the belt diagonally across his chest. At this poin the had forgotten about hide and seek and wanted to swing round his new toy. He reached back and pulled the sword out of its sheath. As he held it in front of him the blade began to crackle with energy and a voice spoke to him inside his head.

“I am Inabikari the silver sword.” the voice said. He was surprised, but kept hold of the sword. “What is your name young human?”

“I’m Denkou Raijin.” he replied with a slight surprise to his voice.

“So the legendary hero is a young human named Raijin?” the voice asked. Raijin looked confused. “The one who manages to unsheath me will become a legendary hero.” the sword explained. Rajin nodded confused still. “The voice took on a harsher tone. “You must not let me be taken. Please sheath me and then I will become invisible to all but you. When you unshetah me I will become visible. The next time you unshetah me will be tomorrow when you train with me.” Raijin nodded and sheathed the sword firmly.





At this point a dragon knight in crimson dragon armour was standing before the dragon kinght council. He was in serious trouble.

“Dragon knight Blaze. You are charged with the dishonoring of our order by killing an innocent whsilt on your mission.” the head council member, a dragon knight in icy blue armour said. Blaze stood ther his arms tied behind his back with energy cuffs. “How do you plead?”

“I cannot lie. I am guilty of the charges which you set before me Councillor Hail.” he replied. “What is my punishment?”

“You are hereby cast out of our order. You will be allowed to keep your armour you of what you had, but your sword will be taken and you will be given a drgaon's tail whip and a dragon fang spear to add to your dishonour “ Hail replied. Blaze nodded grimly. “You will also be banished from Shadia and must instead wander the land.’ Blaze nodded. “Take him away and leave him outside the town gates with only his new weapons and armor to keep him company. Give him no other supplies.” she ordered indicating a dragon knight wearing orange armor. "Scorch even though he is your brother by blood do not take pity on him. OBey the order to the letter."

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Two hours later Raijin had found all of his friends and had played another game of hide and seek with him hiding this time. When that round was over he decided to head home because it was almost time for his dinner. It was about six o’clock in the evening and it was about dusk in Shadia at this time.

“Inabikari. I have a question for you.” he said tentatively. The sword remained silent. “I guess you want me to ask my question so here it is. It’s purely for the sake of when I’m sleeping or sitting down, but if I took the sword belt off and left you somewhere would you still be invisible to everyone?”

“No.Unattached to you I would drift into my sleep again and I could not maintain invisibility.” the sword answered. “You would have to cast a spell or put me somewhere I cannot be seen to keep me hidden when I am not attached to by the swordbelt or by your hand.” Raijin looked over his shoulder at the sword.

“A spell?” he whispered. “I can’t do magic or illusions or anything like that.” He heard the sword laugh at his words. It was a strangely metallic laugh, but very pure.

“Maybe not before maybe, but the wielder of this sword is given strange and wondrous powers.” the sword stated matter of factly. “I will teach you to use them.” Raijin rolled up his sleeve and looked at his watch. He would be late for dinner if he didn’t run and then his uncle would punish him. He began to run, but still spoke to the spirit of the sword.

“Will it take a long time to learn these powers?” he enquired. He wanted to use magic. It just sounded so cool to him.

“To learn all I have to teach it will take seven nights and seven days.” the sword replied. “The way of the sword and of magic will be taught to you whilst you sleep and then you practice your skil during the day.” the sword went quiet for a moment then spoke again. “I sense a great power already within you and I have not yet instilled my power to you. You may be the one who can unlock my true form and also powers beyond that of any living thing unless the black blade is unsheathed and it’s true power unlocked by the villain to do the deed.”

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hmm, very mysterious. looks very good, keep it up!

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heh the action will start soon perhaps in chapter 2
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“Name: Doreiku. Crime: Theivery of many home and buildings. Suggested punishment: Imprisonment for 30 years.” Nathan stated. He had just got back from a very unhappy museum. Infact so unhappy that they had reported him to his superior officer the head of the Shadian police force. He had called Nathan to his office. He was furious and had demoted Nathan to a court room guard. He was told to give the report to the judges when he took Doreiku to be judged. After a few minutes of talking the head judge spoke.

“The court has come to its decision. The theif Doreiku is henceforth banished from our town and if he returns and is found he is to be immediately exterminated.” he stated. Nathan nodded regrettably. It had taken him years to capture Doreiku and they were just going to let him go. “He will also be imprisoned for one week without food or water.” Nathan nodded again with a slight smile. Now that was justice.






Blaze sat outside the town of Shadia his head resting on the only entrance to the city. The gate of Shadia. He had been left by his brother without a word. All he had was his armour, a spear, a whip and his name. He sighed and looked around. He knew he would have to hunt to survive or find a job in another town.

“I guess I’m going to have to live a woodsman’s life for a while.” he said. “I am no longer a dragon knight, but a dragon ranger.” he decided. “Blaze the dragon ranger has a nice ring to it I admit.” he deattached the whip from his belt. It had a crimson dragon head around the handle and the eye worked like a button. He lashed it out at a tree as he stood up and pressed the eye. As he did spike jutted out from it. As it hit the tree it snapped like a twig. “A dishonorable weapon, but very powerful.” He reattached the whip to his belt and deattached a small dragon fang with a button on the top. He pressed it and the tooth extended into a halberd. The spear point and axe blade on it were the colour of yellowed teeth. The shaft was crimson and the grip was leather. He smirked and attached it to his sword belt where his sheathe use to be. “Dishonourable it might be, but it suits me better then a sword." he whispered as he dashed into the woods. He was not actually encumbers med by the five foot long spear for he was 6ft6 and also the spear shrunk slightly when not in use.

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Meanwhile Doreiku was sitting on the floor of the holding cell waiting for the week to be over. As a guard walked past Doreiku dashed forward silently and stealthily stole the keys from the guard then returned to sitting on the floor with a slight smirk on his face. His ninja mask had been taken so had his belt and weapons. He would have to steal the weapons before he escaped. The mask he could live without, but his weapons were a family heirloom. His weapons included a dagger and a short sword. He stroked his short black hair and looked around the outside of his cell with his pale green eyes.

“Hey guard.” he shouted. The guard turned and looked at him through the cell bars.

“What do you want theif?” the guard asked. “Make it quick I’m not in the mood.” the guard was armed with a spear which could easily reach him so Doreiku knew not to push the guard too much.

“I was just wondering where my weapons were.” Doreiku said nonchalantly. The guard looked at him suspiciously. “Hey it’s not like I can steal them from in here. I just wanted to know that they are somewhere safe. They are a family heirloom.” the guard pointed to a box at the end of the room.

“Your weapons are there.” the guard said. “Anything else?” he added a slight angry tone to his voice. Doreiku shook his head.

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shoudl i contineu with this. no-one is commenting. is nayone even reading?

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sorry blaze, i like it. i hope he finds his weapons

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oi will contineu jhsut got a bit of writers block

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Raijin had arrived home and after saying hello to his parents and finding out that his dinner would be about twenty minutes he headed upstairs to his bedroom. He placed the sword on his bed before collapsing next to it. The belt retracted until only the buckle on the sheath was visible. He placed his hand on it.
“Inabikari when I sleep tonight will I need to have you attached to me for you to teach me the powers?” he asked. If so it would be extremely uncomfortable.
“No. If you detach the belt from the sheath and wear it then I will remain in a sort of standby mode rather then going to sleep and then I can teach you. I must be close.” it stated. “Otherwise it will not work. Underneath the bed will be fine.” Raijin nodded and looked at his four posted bed with it’s blue curtains. He sighed. “What is wrong Raijin?”
“Nothing I’m just worried.” he stated. The sword asked what about. “All this legendary hero stuff. It means I’m going to have to save people. It’s a big responsibility. I just don’t want to screw up.” If the sowrd had a face you could tell it would be wearing a reassuring face as it said.
“Don’t worry kid. You’ll do fine. My last wielder a female part bat part human part machine didn’t have half as much power as you.” it said. “Her name was Crimson the treasure hunter. I reckon you two would of gotten on just fine. You have a similar attitude.”

Meanwhile Doreiku was staring at the lock of his cell. It was a very new lock wih a thumbprint scanner and retina scanner as well as a key which would be impossible to replicate. He knew what he had to do. It was the only choice which would give him the strength to escape. If he waited till they came to release him he wouldn’t have the strength to fight them off and they wouldn’t give him his weapons when they chucked him out the gates. He would have to knock out the guard and use his bio signature and key to unlock the cell. Then he could get his weapons and fight his way out. He could also take the weapons of the guard to sell later and those of anyone else he knocked out or killed to escape. “I only have one shot at this.” he said to himself so the guard couldn’t hear him. “I have to do it at the right time or not at all. I think I’ll do it on the fourth day. That gives me three days to locate that sword. I bet someone found it by now.” he sighed. “Hmmm this will be interesting. I better get some rest.” He laid down on the bed and shook his head making his silver hair wave about. He closed his green eyes and began to sleep.

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wow... this blade is really mysterious. looking good!