Payback

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"Leave now." Ben ordered in a firm voice. "Or i will kill you." He notice the wooden sword and scoffed. "That little toy is all the protection you bring with you?" he put a hand behidn his back. "Reckon it will stop this?" he asked as he pulled out a dagger. He expected me to jump back or react in a scared manner, but instead i smirked.
"yeah i do. You have a sharp point which you are unlikely to be trained with. I have a blunt wooden sword which can be classed as a club ." I stated. "Both of which i have trained with every day since i was five. I have a tactical advantage"

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Cool, very intresting

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Ben laughed and spoke. "Why do you think I am hiding here?" he asked. 'Because i have killed many people with this dagger." he knocked the wooden sword out of my hand's and added. "People who underestimated me. All of them died thinknig they could beat me." He grabbedme round the throat and pinned me against the wall his dagger aimed at my heart. It was then he looked in my eyes which had changed from blue to yellow and were pusling with energy. An aura surroudned me and i grabbed his wrist and puleld it form my throat. He stared at me.
"What are you." He asked fear in his voice.
"Your worst nightmare." I replied disarming him and to his and my surprise the knife extened into a sword the same size as my wooden one (3ft long blade about 0.5ft handle). " My name is the Black Knightmare and you are my enemy."

[Haunter 360]

Bye Ben.


Anyhow, keep writing Blaze!

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OR IS IT?
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Ben gasped at this kid's inhuman strength and powers. It was the last sound he ever made before his eyes were closed by being flung into a wall. Shayne ' the black nightmare' walked over to him and checked for a pulse.
"Good he's still alive." he stated the aura fading and his eyes returning to normal. "Just unconscious." Shayne gabbed his own stuff, some flint, wood and hay and the man's food supply. He let only enough for the man to survive for a day. He then left and exited the cave. To his surprise and slight joy Ben had left a bike outside. It would make his journey a lot easier. He got on the bike and pedaled off up the road towards the harbour. He would need to leave the country so no-one would no him. Luckily he could speak fluent French* so it would be easy. "Now to get to France. I have some money so I'll get it converted on the boat and then try to get a job in France." He then realized something. "I don't have a passport."

He headed off back to the cave where Ben was still unconciosu. Shayne thoguht for a moment then grabbed some rope and tied the man's arms and legs then made a fire.
"I need to sleep." he whispered.

Find me Shayne and i will heal you said the voice in his dream I am a bio engineer my name is Dmoninic. Use your brain to find me. I'm in England, but nowhere near your town. I have a car so can move faster then you so you will have to hurry. I won't stay in any place longer then three days or travel more then 20 miles from the place. Clues will be on the net. On a site called the Game Master's domain.

*All French will be translated into English so people understand

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Oh no!
Shayne's having shameless advertising in his dream!
*Faints*
*Gets up again*
Keep continuing if its what you want!
*Faints again*

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My version:
Verse: I’m not gonna be a part of some stupid game
I’m always gonna be hated
Science has torn my life right apart,
But I will not go insane

Chorus: I've got no way to die
I've got no place to run to.
They hate to see me
They love to hurt me
I will beat them all
Black nightmare, your not human
That's what they always said
I'm no coward, nor a hero
I'll always be alone
But I'm gonna stay alive
Shayne against the world
I’m Shayne against the world

Verse: I won't let them change my ultimate quest
I’m not gonna let them defeat me
I won't let them change the thoughts in my head
Or make me be like them

Chorus: I've got no way to die
I've got nowhere to run.
They hate to see me
They love to hurt me
I’ll beat them all
Black Knightmare, your not human
That's what they always said
I'm no coward, nor a hero
I’ll always be alone
But I'm gonna stay alive
Shayne against the world
I’m Shayne against the world

Verse: Now I'm sick of your ranting
About my quest’s purpose
You can shoot all your gun
But nothing you shoot’s gonna hurt me
You can try and fight me
And Fire all what you want to
But Your guns won’t help you win.

Chorus: Black Knightmare, your not human
That's what they always said
I'm no coward, nor a hero
I’ll fight you on my own
Coz I’m Shayne against the world
Black Knightmare, your not human
That's what they always said
I'm no coward nor a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I'm gonna stay alive
They'll never bring me down
I'll never fall in line
I'll defeat you on my own
Coz I’m Shayne against the world


Thats an edit of Me against the world by simple plan. It's a song Shayne is gonna sing later. Thogu i'd put it here in case my comptuer messes up and i have to delete the eidt. it's safe here

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When I awoke I rememberd My dream word for word and nodded to myself. I untied Ben then left jumping on the bike and headed off towards town. It was Friday so my house woudl be empty. It was nto uncommno for me to stay away form hoem for awhile so they wooudln't be worried. When i got to my house i unlocked it with my key and went up to my room. I sta down and logged onto my laptop and went into my favourites so i could go on a search site to search for Game MAster's Domain, but to my surprise it had been added to my favourites. I cliked on it and found the first clue.
"On an island which is no longer and island you will find me in the gate to the west." it siad. I knew immediatley it meant Thanet and i gasped in horror. "Thats over 100 miles away. How am i meant to get there in three days on a bike. I'd have to ride at least 33 miles a day and 34 on one of them." I nodded. I had to do it. I grabbed my laptop and slid it in my bag. I would need it. I smirked and grabed my passport and some money. "This time i'll be prepared. I looked at the dagger which had shrunk back to it's normal size at the bottom of my bag and saw my eyes in it. They were yellow.

[Haunter 360]

# Bright eyes...


Anyhow, this is cool. Keep on at it Blaze!

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He's not yoru average school kid. He's smarter then most. His grades are at the least 98%'s in all is subjects. He's even more abnormal now with his powers. Woudl ou want to be him?

[Haunter 360]

I can tell you would, and I don't blame you!
He's an awesome guy...


I guess though, I'd prefer to live this life.
It ain't brilliant, but it has its perks...
Like this forum, and all my friends here!
*Crushes everyone in hug*
BEAR HUG!!!!



Keep writing anyway. This is so cool...

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I alreayd do live part of his life. The bullyig bit anyway. he highsocres. My avergae is about 80%. the pwoers woul be useful, but i don't think i'd liek to have to leave home and be on the run and have t bike ride miles to tyr and catch a amd scientist. BE an adventure though.

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I gasped and stared. The modification was taking hold of me. I loked at my arms and legs which were definately more muscular. He thoguht for a moment. There was something good about this genetic modification afterall. It would make it easier forme to catch this Dominic. I exited the house and leapt on the bike and pedalled off. I had two and half days to get all the way to thanet and then work out where the gate to the west was. It was going to be a very difficult joruney and i would be doing it alone.

[Haunter 360]

But don't worry Shayne, wherever you go...

The Rabbids are with you.




Oh no! RUN!!!
(And write more whenever you want Blaze)

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wiritng in firts person can be annoying