Payback

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I trying to do a fantasy story based in nowadays time. i gonna try to get rid of swords and dragons in this at least for a while and try to just focus n humans. Powers may come into it though
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How i wished i could get my own back on them all. How i wished i could throw my weight about and force others to change so i wouldn't hurt them. How i wished i could bully the bullies. Then again if i did then i would be as bad as them or would I? If i changed the bullies into better people by bullying them then stopped bullying myself it would be OK right? Thats what i thought before that day occurred. The day when my life changed and everyone began to fear me. Oh by the way my name's Shayne Knight the kid who used to be the butt of everyone's little jokes. The jokes that according to some are character building. Because my name's Knight they take the mick because knights are supposed to be brave and strong and i was the opposite. I'd run from anyone that could hurt me and i could barely lift my school bag. I guess i should tell you what i look like. I've got longish blonde hair and blue eyes. I'm about 5ft4 and i weigh about 55kg. You may think being able to run would get me into the people's good books, but it doesn't. Being smart cancels it out and i was smarter then them all and had corrected teacher's a few times. They were all so thick. I guess i should begin the story on that day. The day when the geek became one of the most dangerous people on the planet.

[Haunter 360]

Nice stuffs there Blaze!
Very good intro. Keep it up dude!

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[glow=red,20,300]Chapter 1: The day my life changed[/glow]

It was my birthday and it was one of the worst and yet best days of my life. I got up at about haf past seven and slid out of my pyjama's and slid on a pair of boxers and then a pair of socks. I then proceeded to put on my shirt and trousers before putiing on my tie and blazer. I sighed and combed my hair before brushing my teeth and heading downstairs. My family were there normal annoying selves by pinching me and punching me lightly and then singing happy birthday. I groaned and grabbed some toast before leaving the house and heading for school.

When i arrived it was only eight o'clock i quickly dashed into the buidling where more teachers were about and i was less likely ot be seen by Alfie and his gang of thugs. Basically the whole year group. I didn't fit in with any of the groups thoguh i had tried becoming what i dispised and trying to live another's life. It ended up worse then i could imagine. Never try to fit in with chavs unless you are one. It hurts.
"If i can last through today then i have only 40 days left of torment before i cna stay at home and talk to people who don't hate me." i whispered. It was at that point the first thing happened. Someone hit me in the back, but instead of hurting like a punch it stung like a needle and my whole body felt strange. "Ouch." i said as i walked towards my form room. By my form room i mean i'm the captain of the form. If you think it was because i make a good authroity figure then your wrong. I was elected as a joke.

[Haunter 360]

Interesting!
Well, write more when it suits ya Blaze!
Try to stick at it!

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I will. Hey you read Journey of the shadow warrior?
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I opened the door and ooked about for traps. As i expected there was a leg on the floor waiting to trip up the unsuspecting student, but i was smarter then that and walked over it. As soon as i entered i heard laghing and jeering, but ignored it and sat down in my seat which was in the middle of the room. Not too good a spot for a victim. I rubbed my back where the person had got me earlier. To my surpirse i felt a small drop of wetness. I pulled my hand form my shoulder and looked at it. On my hand was blood.
"What did they hit me with?" i wondered.

[Haunter 360]

A rainbow drop?
A french yak?


... I DON'T KNOW!!!



... I'll shut up now and read. No, I haven't read Journey of the Shadow Warrior yet. Anyhow, keep writing Blaze!
This is gonna get goooood...

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I sighed and answered my name as the teacher called the register and left with insults being shouted at me. I headed towards my first lesson French. It went as normal. I did the work faster then anyone else, I got a high mark on the test and got a merit. My average french lesson. At the end of it i headed off towards physics. It was one of the few trulky boring lessons. All we did was read some page and answer question from the textbook.
"So boring." i said to myself. At the end of the lesson i headed out for what i feared the most. Breaktime.

I headed off for a corner where i hoped i could be alone to eat some food. Unfortunatel i was wrong. After i sta down a group of chavs walked over an started insulting me and doing typical stupidd chavvy things. One of them kicked me and i felt something weird inside me.
"Leave me alone."i mumbled. All of them laughed.
"What was that nerdy?" the leader (Alfie) asked as he swung a punch at me. To his surprise i caught it and rose to my feet.
"I said..." i replied quietly then shouted. "LEAVE ME ALONE." I lifted him off his feet by his hand and used him like a mace to send the other's flying. A strange aura surrounded me as i grabbed Alfie by the throat. My eyes glowed red and i threw him into a wall. I looked at thre bodies crumpeld on the floor with broken bones, cuts and bruises. I raised my hands. "what have i done?" i whsipered as i dash towards the gates of the school. "How did i become so strong?" I asked myself as i left the school and headed towards home. I knew if i stayed i'd be expelled and i might hurt someoen again. I knew i had to get clothes and supplies and leave home. I was a freak. A danger to society.

Thats how it all began.. Once i rached home i changed into some more comfortbale clothes and grabbed my sunglasses and wooden sword. I had a feeling it would come in handy.. I then headed otwards the cuoboard and grabbed drinks, biscuits, bread and other long lasting supplies and slid them in ym back pack after i emptied it. I grabbed a piece of paer and left a note. I'm sorry everyone. I can't stay. Love Shayne[\i]. I slid the novels i was writing in my bag, an empty book, some pens and some books to rea. I would need to entertain myself so i could stay sane.
"I wish i could stay." i whispered as i left. I was glad my family were out.

[Haunter 360]

I guess that's a pretty wise choice, on Shayne's half.
I mean, if his family came to know, they could be endangered, seeing as science would want to experiment on him, and if they knew, they'd be in danger...


Anyhow, keep writing more whenever you wanna Blaze!
This is, in all honesty, a really interesting story.
What happens?!

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I got no plans from now.
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[glow=red,20,300]Chapter 2: A message in a dream[/glow]
I knew i needed somewhere to sleep, but where? My first thoughts were that i should head for a family member, but other then my mum, dad and borhter i had no fmaily nearby. Most of my family had abandoned England and gone to warmer and better climates.
"I need money, but i have no way of getting any." i whispered. "I also have nowhere to go and nowhere to run. I need to get as far away from civlisation and science as possible." I dashed away heading towards the sea. Perhaps i could find a cave down there is what i thought. I knew how to start a fire so i could stay warm. "Thank the lord for my wilderness training."

[Haunter 360]

Cool... Well, when ideas arrive, continue!
I'm gonna be reading!

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Luckily after a few hours I found a cave which wouldn't be flooded by sea water and entered it jsut as it got dark. It appeared that someone had been there and left as there was a stock of firewood and some flint and other useful tools. It also looked like they left in a hurry.
"So they probably won't come back." I decided. "And if they do. At least's it will be company if they are friendly and if not i have my sword." I quickly piled up some firewood and grabbed some flint from the cave wall. I smirked and grabbed some hay, which was also in this cave. I placed it jsut under the wood then began to clink the peieces of flint together to make sparks. It took a few tires, but eventually i managed to get the hay to smoke and soon the wood caught fire. I sighed wishing i was at home as i pulled out some biscuits and began to eat some. It wasn't much of a dinner, but i didn't have much of a choice.

[Haunter 360]

Interesting... But be careful...


Oh wait, he can't hear me. Poo.
Anyhow, keep writing Blaze!
This is a cool story... Carries a lotta promise!

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Awesome story you got there Blaze, if you want idea's talk to me on MSN I got a load

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Just as I was dropping off to sleep I heard footsteps and placed my hand on the wooden sword's handle. I saw the feet in front of me and rolled awya form them and leapt ot my feet draawing the sword.
"Who are you boy?" the figure asked.
"Isn't it polite to give your name before asking?" Shayne replied. "I'll give you My name though it's Shayne. Whats yours?"
"I'm Ben and your in my cave using my firewood, flint and tinder. What are you doing here?" Ben asked.
"I had to leave my home due to problems."

[Haunter 360]

Dun dun daaaaa... There's a guy there!
Quick! Blow him up!