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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 2, 2007 10:39:22 GMT -5
ok. This introduces a new character. ----------------------------------------------------------
Heat. The heat was radiating from the sun as Spear was lying peacefully on the beach under his parasol. Quazon was in the summer sun making a sand chao. Spear had his shirt folded neatly on the beach towel. Waves roared as they spalshed against the beach, in and out. Spear could hear shouting. He had his silver shades on with a yellow gem in the corner.
Quazon got his spade and started digging a hole. He said "chao" in delight. He pushed some wet sand together to make a ball. He then added some to the top and molded it into a point. He set it on top of the 'body' of his chao. "Now to make the facial features" He said to himself.
Spear opened one eye slightly and then and then closed it. His shades had slipped down his nose a lot. Snoring noises could be heard soon after. Spear had fallen asleep. His hands were behind his head. He had his orange shorts on and a pair of black and orange sandals. His ears pr-icked round at every single noise he heard. Sudden screams awoke a half-asleep Spear. People were running along the beach. "What the--" Spear put his shades on top of his head and the looked back the way pople were coming from. A monster was roaming the beach. Spear got his shirt and then slipped it over his shoulders. He grabbed Quazon who was squirming. "I WANNA FINISH MY SAND CHAO!" He screamed. Spear paid no heed. "looks like Neo is back" He thought to himself.
From the eyes of teh machine Neo was chuckling evilly. "Soon Spear will be mine." He said, his voice was mechanical. "When I get his DNA. I will show him."
The robots sharp-clawed hand became elongated and reached towards Spear. It grasped him and made Quazon fall out of his grip. "QUAZON! GET AMY!" Spear yelled. "CHAO CHAO" The chaos chao scampered away to find Amy. A metal door was opened in the centre of it's body and Spear was placed inside.
"Back to the lab" Neo commanded. The robot turned swiftly and returned to the lab.
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Spear woke up from his long nap. He found himself on a table which was freezing cold. Weapons were neatly hung on the wall and in a test tube was a robot. Neo came in from the shadows. "I want your DNA" Neo said simply. He plucked several hairs out from Spear's chest as if wanting to cause pain. Spear didn't mind. He didn't feel any hurt. "Why do you want my DNA" Spear snapped "For this robot" Neo pointed to the robot. He put the hairs in a tube. They fell down into a machine. It came out the other side as a liquid. "This can turn DNA into a liquid. Now to pour it into the contraption" Neo poured it into the robots vent on it's back. "Now Metal Spear...come to life" Neo comanded.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2007 12:11:20 GMT -5
The machines optic sensors activated with a pale blue light. It's colours changed from a dull grey to those of Spear. Orange, silver, red and black. However his centre piece was yellow. He looked about observing his surroundings. Neo-Hamin pushed a button and the test tube lifted off him. The liquid he was suspended in flooded out and was taken in by vents around his the tube. He looked around the room before seeing Neo-Hamin and Spear. He calmly strolled over to Spear and to his creator's surprise broke his bonds. He tapped Spear on the head knocking him out cold. He lifted Spear over his shoulder and held onto his legs. With his free hand he fired a stream of energy blasts into the wall. "You made a mistake when you created me Neo-Hamin. You did not restrict my personality." he said in a voice that sounded almost identical to Spears. However, it had a slight metaalic edge to it. "I will not kill you because i owe you for my creation. See ya." He activated the jets attached to his feet and back and flew off towards the city. He landed outside Club Rouge. He had all of Spear's memories and this was a place he knew Spear would get rest. He rasied his free hand and opened the door. He walked into the bar and dropped Spear onto one of the stools. "What happened to Spear? who are you?" Rouge asked. "Spear was captured by Neo-Hamin. I was created from his DNA to serve Neo-Hamin. However, i have Spear's personality i do not take orders." he stated. "As for who I am...Neo-Hamin called me Metal Spear, but i would rather not be associated with someone who gets captured so easily. So call me....Sabre." he walked over to the door. "See ya Rouge. Tell Spear he has a rival for any treasure in the world. Oh and tell him thanks for the DNA and....." he stopped for a moment. " For part of the thunder chaotic power." With that he dashed off through the town and onto the beach. He looked at what was left of the sand chao and sighed. "Companionship..." he whispered. "Something I'll never have." ( Metal Spear : i153.photobucket.com/albums/s225/thouhairegglemaster/Metal_Shadow_by_ChadtheCartoonNut.jpg)and yes this is a collab between me and CS
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 2, 2007 12:32:53 GMT -5
ok continuing on --------------------------
Spear woke up after a few hours of sleep. "Huh....where am I? How did I get here?" Spear asked dazily "Whre's Quazon?" He asked in a worried tone "I sent him off to get Amy didn't I.." He remembered.
"Spear, a robot carried you here." Rouge appeared and explained to him. "He said his name was Mtal Spear. But he would rather be called Sabre. He said tha any treasure you hunt for, he wil be your rival. He has all your memories--"
"He knows about Amy? Quazon? My brother Capper? Hero Island? My folks?" Spear interrupted
"Yes" Rouge responded. "He also has part of the Thunder Chaotic Power"
"WHAT!?" Spear yelled. He looked out the window "I need to find Quazon. See ya Rouge. Good day to you" He smirked and jumped out the window.
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Quazon was walking along the street, avoiding the masses of feet trying to step on him. "I need to find Amy" He looked across the street. There was a chao trying to cross the road. In fact. Quazon recognised this chao. It was Mystico without his owner. Mystico crossed the road within a mass of people. He stepped onto the pavement and the started walking. "Maybe he's heading for Amy's house. He knows these streets pretty well." Quazon set off slowly to avoid suspicion. Mystico rounded the corner and so did Quazon.
After stalking Mystico for a few streets he came to a manor house in the suburbs. In fact. He knew it was Amy's house. Being the Shadow Fantic that she was, she had flags draped down the balcony with Shadow on them. Quazon climbed the crystal blue gates and then jumped off onto the over side. He heard growling behind him as he walked up the gravel path. Quazon turned round and saw a mecha bull-dog. Quazon squeeled and then made a run for the front door.
Crystal Amy looked out over the balcony and saw Quazon rushing towards the front door. She jumped over the balcony and then picked up Quazon quickly. "Bad Bull-dog bad" She scolded the robot dog. The dog gruffed and then walked away to patrol the grounds. "Hey Quaz, where's Spear? you aren't on your own normally" She asked him sweetly. "Spear's in trouble" He said panicy "Was he captured?" "NO TIME!" Quazon jumped out of her arms and the waddled off. Amy followed suit. They had no idea that Spear wasn't in trouble.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2007 13:02:36 GMT -5
Metal Spear sat on the beach staring at the sunset. He rose to his feets and focused. His left hand retracted and a blade of blue energy came out of it. He nodded and focused. It changed to gold as the thunder chaotic power pulsed through it. He nodded and retracted it replacing it with his hand. He clenched both his fists and the ornage parts on his wrist extended slightly revealing small guns. he fired a stream of energy bulets from them into the sea. He nodded in satisfaction. He heard footsteops behind him and turned aiming his guns at the approacing figures. He lowered them as he saw Amy and Quazon.
"If your looking for Spear then he's at Club Rouge." he said before dashing off towards Club Rouge. He saw Spear outside it about to dash off. Hiding in the shadows he fired a microscopic tracer onto Spear. It would allow him to hear what Spear was saying even if he was on the other side of the planet. Satisfied he entered the club and sat down looking at Rouge.
"Hey Sabre." she said. "Long time no see." she added as a joke. He looked up at her.
"Very funny Rouge." he replied shaking his head. "I was wondering if I could perhaps stay here for a while until i get my own place."
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 3, 2007 9:15:50 GMT -5
Spear's ears pri-cked up. He heard talking. Spear jumped and latched onto the window. He pulled himself up. He saw Sabre talking to Rouge. "You imposter. Tell me who you are!" Spear demanded. "I am Metal Spear, but call me Sabre." He said "Where's Quazon? Do you know where they are?" Spear asked "Try the beach" Sabre said simply.
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Crystal Amy was sitting on the beach. Quazon was recreating his sand chao. Since it had been crushed. "Now. The arms" He said proudly. "Come on Quazon, we need to find Spear" Amy said, she got up and then started walking away. "Darn it. I was almost done" Quazon pouted then walked after a slowly fading Amy.
Quazon walked beside her. "Maybe Rouge has seen him" Amy suggested. Quazon nodded in agreement.
--------------------(outside Rouges house)----------- They knocked on Rouge's door. It opened and Rouge was at the door. "Hey Rouge, Have you seen Spear?" Amy asked casually. "Spear, Amy's here" Spear came to the door "Amy, Hi!" Spear picked up Quazon and give him a soft hug. "Hiya Quazon" Amy enveloped both of them in a hug "I haven't seen you Spear since last month. What's been happening?" "Well. I've found A Thunder Chaotic Power. Loads of stuff. I found my brother" Spear told her. "Well, seems you've been having fun. I need to go. Mystico might be getting up to ANYTHING." She explained She walked down the steps and then walked down the road. Spear closed the door and then took refuge on the sofa with Quazon on his lap. Spear picked up the newspaper and the checked out the news.
--------------------(later)--------------------------------- Spear was lieing down on the sofa, the newspaper over his eyes, snoring away. Quazon was curled up on on his rising and falling stomach. Rouge came in and then put her hands on her hips. She screamed. "SPEAR!!!!" Spear bolted forward making Quazon fly forward. Quazon slipped along the wood floor, stopping right in front of Rouge. "WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT SLEEPING ON THE COUCH YOU POTATO?!" "Urm...don't sleep on the couch, sleep in bed hehe" "Exactly, the couch is not for sleeping" "I thought Sonic had it bad with Amy Rose" Spear sighed.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2007 9:44:11 GMT -5
"Sounds like companionship isn't really that nice."Sabre said as he entered the room. "And don't call me imposter. It's not my fault i was created. You were the one who got caught by Hamin." He glanced at Spear then at Rouge before turning. "I'll see you later Spear and don't think anything you go after will be easy to get. I'll be after them too. No matter what." He headed over to the window.
"That Amy seems to have quite a large home. Maybe she'll let me stay for a while." he mumbled before leaping out the window activating his feet thrusters and skated towards Amy's.
When he arrived he Leapt over the gate and walked up to the door. He heard the growling and turned to see the robot dog. He threatened it by shooting a blast of energy just in front of it. It stared at him before yelping and running back to it's kennel. He knocked on the door.
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 3, 2007 9:59:25 GMT -5
lol ----------
Amy opened the door and saw a robot standing at the doorstep. "I reqiure residence." He said "Can I please stay here?" "Ok.I need to know who you are" She said firstly "Metal--..I mean Sabre" He said. "Ok. Come on in" Sabre came in and was aquainted with a a large living room. A teal couch was set on a sha-ggy rug. There were two armchairs. There was a HD TV set on the wall. A wiimote was lieing on the table. The nunchuk was next to it. The game box was at the other end of the table. The core was underneath the table near the leg. Mystico was sitting on the couch obviously sleep. Sabre sat down next to him and then picked up the Wiimote. He analysed it carefully. "Heh. Not a weapon. A Wiimote, used for playing the Wii" She explained She sat down in an armchair. She then pushed a button to make a foot rest come out of it. She laughed then put her head back. She was so bored.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2007 10:13:19 GMT -5
He flexed his hands. He pretended to scan her. "Subject is Amy of the crysalan race. Has crystal powers. Threat 15%." he said before nodding to her. "Thanks for accetping my request Amy." he sat down on the other armchair. "You and Rouge seem to be the only people that don't get annoyed. Then again I've only met Spear, Neo-Hamin, You, Rouge and Quazon." he sighed. "Then again compaionship seems to be nothing but hassle."
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Post by Haunter 360 on Sept 3, 2007 11:11:50 GMT -5
Woah. This one's the coolest Spear story so far! Me likes it - Both Mystico and Blaze are writing greatly!
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 3, 2007 11:32:20 GMT -5
thankies Haunter...very nice.
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 5, 2007 12:26:38 GMT -5
Ok let's move --------------------
Amy stood up and then walked out the door to the hallway. She climbed the grand stairs and then opened a door in front of her. She came into her bedroom. She had Shadow posters on her walls. Her walls were pink. She had a 4 poster bed with cushions which had pictures of Shadow embroidered into them. She jumped and then landed on her bed. She looked out the french doors to the right of her. She then got up and opeend them to face an incoming breeze. She looked out over the vast seas. Hero Island was peacefully floating over the ocean. "I wish I could return" She whispered.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2007 12:31:05 GMT -5
He took up the remote and began to play Sonic and the Secret rings. Due to his immense robotic intelligence as well as gaming experience from Spear's DNA he easily completed several levels. He looked at Mystico and sighed. "everyone has friends and companions except me." he whispered.
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 5, 2007 12:53:40 GMT -5
WOOHOO! ----------------------
Crystal Amy went downstairs again and then entered the living room again. She watched Sabre from the door and smirked. He had part of Spear in him. Spear was always good at games like this. "Hey Sabre" Sabre paused the game and then turned his head round. "Do you have a friend?" Amy asked. She picked up and sleeping Mystico and cradled him in her arms. He gurgled then snuggled into her more. Sabre then answered "No, I don't Why?" "Would you like to become my friend?" She asked "Hmm...Yes..I would like that" He then resumed the game and started again. "Alf-Layla-wa-Layla means 1001 nights ya know" Amy said out of the blue. "That's nice" Sabre said back absent-mindedly. A rumble, a glass cup moved, a bigger rumble, the glass cup moved more. A huge tremour, the cup smashed on the florr. "I guess I'll have to pick that up". The door banged, nearly making it come out the hinges "What the--" The door smashed open revealing a tall robot giant. He had a silver chestplate, blue wings with red stripes, long arms with a spherical hand with elongated claws coming off. He had huge eyes, blue set on Black. He had a horn protruding to the front of his head. Blue and red stripes were set under his eyes. His tail was long and bulky. His legs were bulky too. rings were clasped round his arms and legs with skulls on them. He roared mechanically. He then flung his arm round making an armchair go flying. He then charged forward and Crystal Amy jumped sideways. She set Mystico inside a cabinet so he wouldn't get hurt. She then jumped infront of hima nd gave him and punch to his face. He roared again and then made a swipe at her but missed. She landed near the fireplace. "He must have a weak spot" Crystal Amy said. Infact, he did not.
This would be a tough matchup.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2007 13:20:45 GMT -5
Sabre pushed her out of the way. "Leave him to me Amy. He's here for me." he said rolling up into a ball and boosting into the machine knocking him outside. "Now i can fight without risking damaging this beauitful home." he whispered and fired several blasts of energy from his guns at the giant's feet. It did nothing. He activated his blade with thunder pulsing through it and charged. "Cross sabre." He sliced in a cross at the machine's chest. It cut throuhg the armour barely and sparks shot from the cut as some wires had been cut. He shot at this with thunderized bullets of energy. "Thunder shot." The machine cluthced it's stomach with it's metallic hand. "Get out of here now or die. Lightning strike." He charged like a bolt of lightning thunder crackling from his body and did a homing attack knocking the heavy machine down. It rose up slowly.
"I will crush you next time." he stated darkly. "And your friend will be next Metal Spear." He turned and dashed off.
"The name's SABRE." he shouted. "And you'll be the one crushed OBliterase."
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Post by CS Revolked on Sept 5, 2007 14:49:02 GMT -5
Amy watched Obliterase run away from the scene. Her door had been knocked off it's hinges. She opened the cupboard and got Mystico out of it, then she shut it. She sat down on the couch. then put Mystico in the corner. She then pulled the armchair to where it should be. Sabre enetred the manor again. "I've got rid of him." Sabre stated. He then sat down next to Mystico. His metallica fingers combed through Mystico's fur on top of his head. "What's it like owning a chao?" Sabre asked randomly. "It's a big responsibilty if you wanna raise them, but they're good for lonely people as pets, very loyal" Amy replied. She then fell back into the seat. She yawned. She switched the tv on by levitaing a crystal spire and then pressing the on button with it. "I have Crystal telekinesis. I can levitate anything crystal" She explained. It went onto Mystico's favourite program, 'Happy-TTown' Mystico sprang up from sleep as soonm as he heard the opening theme. He said "HAPPY-TOWN" in a chao-like voice. Cryatl Amy sighed and the allowed Mystico to watch it. She wasdn't particularly bothered. Mystico bounced up and down on the springy seat, though he didn't go fling. A man in a very odd costume came on. He jiggled his hands about while chanting the words 'Happy-Town' he went offscreen the other side. Mystico had a love-heart above his head. He always watched this "He's been watching it since he was first born." Amy explained to Sabre. Mystico just had his eyes glued on screen, occasionally nodding his head up and down. Amy sighed. "Better get dinner started then" She got up and thenwalked into the kitchen, which was latched onto the living room since it was all open plan. She clanked up the steps and then got a can of tomato soup from the cupboard "I'm not that hungry, I'll just make some soup." She decided. She got a bowl and then poured the liquid substance into the bowl. She opened the microwave door and then set it on the turntable. She then shut the door. She pressed a time limit in and then turned the nob round a lot. The soup started cooking.
After the soup had finished there was a ping. Amy walked over to the kitchen and then took the soup out with oven gloves on. Remembering it would be hot.She got a spo-on and then took it to the table to cool on there. Mystico stood up on the couch and then looked over and the sweet-smelling liquid. He crawled over Sabre and then jumped onto the arm rest. He looked at it intently. Amy came back and looked and Mystico with a smirk. She then set the spo-on and down and went to get another one.
She finally came back and then rested in the chair. She set the soup on her lap "Mystico can you pass me the spo-on?" She asked politely. Mystico flapped his wings and then grasped the two spo-ons He handed one to Amy and then kept one. He rested on the arm rest beside her. "Me have some?" He queried innocently Amy nodedd her head suddenly. Mystico slid down so he could have some. Amy petted his head softly like a loving owner would. She dipped the spo-on in and then ate it. Mystico flopped his spo-on in and then pulled it out. Amy laughed inwardly and then helped Mystico get it to his mouth. He enveloped his mouth round it and then swallowed it. He smiled and Amy and then both did the same. Sabre watched them. He wished he could do that with his family and pets.
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