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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2006 12:59:30 GMT -5
Lol tis good! I liked the way you added in TLCR  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2006 13:11:58 GMT -5
Cool, I needed a way for Carl to realise who we where and we needed to realise who he was
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2006 13:37:58 GMT -5
heh cool. well i proably woudl be on here actually, that ro NMhq or battleon
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:47:12 GMT -5
They where rudely interupted from their talk by another bang. This time Ryan was standing directly next to it, and was flung to the floor. Hannah once again landed on him, but this time she lying across his stomach. Before he could ask her to get off, Dayle landed on top of her, James on top of him, Steven on top of him, Dave on top of him and Carl landed on top of Dave. "GETOFFGETOFFGETOFFGETOFF" cried Ryan. No one had noticed the shocked and scared girl staring at them.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:49:38 GMT -5
kool story NM! keep it coming!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:51:25 GMT -5
I will, btw after a short while this story goes a little dark
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:53:53 GMT -5
OK! thats cool!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:55:24 GMT -5
Cool i can't wait! |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:56:33 GMT -5
It gets a lot more painful for me >_<
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2006 13:57:53 GMT -5
Oh good lol |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 20, 2006 9:30:30 GMT -5
"Where am I" she asked, scared and looking around.
"CARA" cried Steven, forcing his way out from under all the people and running up to her. He hugged her adn then started to explain what was happening. Cara was 13, although she was the same height as Ryan. She had long brown hair which was in a ponytail. She had a black sleeveless top and jeans.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 20, 2006 12:35:14 GMT -5
hehe getting goos.
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Post by doublemxx on Aug 20, 2006 13:09:52 GMT -5
Yes! Fear me for I am CARL!!!! INTERNET GEEK. *shot*
nice story so far NM. ^_^
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2006 3:11:13 GMT -5
*shoots Carl*
thanks for the comments ^_^
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"I thought I'd never see you again" said Steven to Cara. Ryan slowly and painfully crawled out of the pile of people and walked up to them. "Cara, man this makes no sense, why are we all stuck here like this".
About 10 minutes later, they had all sat down in a sort of circle, and where talking with each other. However Ryan and Steven had snuck off because Ryan had some thoughts. "Steven, I think I know 'who' they want"
"What do you mean"? asked Steven, a little confused.
"Look, Dayle, Hannah and Dave all know each other, but they don't know the others, and Cara dosen't know Hannah, the only people here that know all the others, are you, and me. That means it's got to be something to do with one of us".
Steven looked horrified, realising that Ryan was right, yet they still didn't 'what' they wanted and whether or not they wanted Ryan or Steven.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2006 6:32:34 GMT -5
pretty darn good so far
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