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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2006 16:08:46 GMT -5
FIanlly an update and iwht this i go to page 17 on word. YAY --------------- He stared at his stone and focused and saw a glowing pair of purple eyes. “Don’t worry, my love, soon you will be free.” He whispered. “When I have Enticoh I shall have you my by side , dear, malevolent, Chaotica.” “I do not worry my love.” The eyes replied telepathically.
The three warriors walked silently across the plain. Their pace began to quicken as they saw the Blood Mountains. As he saw the mountains were still red and the skies purple. When he entered there his power would increase. “Perfect.”He thought. “Once there I can ditch thes fools and resume my path.” The angel stared at the demon’s glowing red eyes questionably. He wondered what he was plotting. He could tell by his eyes that he was plotting something. “Tariq, listne I think Enigma is plotting something.” He telepathically sent to Tariq. “I can see it in his eyes.”
The entrancement demon carried Serena through the Diablo Pass towards Raxor. She could nto be bothethered to wiat for her to wake form her faint. She had force fed her while she was fainting. She had also administered drink to her, but she did not really care about her. She only cared about one thing getting abck to her only love. The Prince of shadows, the wicked tyrant, Tariq’s own brother, Ilrian. She soon saw Raxor above her. Raxor was a mighty stone fortress town built out of black and purple stone perched above a hot spring and protected by a mighty magic shield. She took to the air and flew through the barrier. She looked towards the centre of the town to see Ilrian’s fortress of Raxor. He had ruled there for hundreds of years. How she rembered the day they first met.
She had just been summoned, by the use of powder, and was waking up(the more powerful ones take a while to adjust, especially when they are pure evil), when Ilrain walked over to her and smiled. She remembered that smile well, it had shown all his yellow fang-like teeth. It was at that moment that she ahd fallen in love with him and him with her. She was his most trustes servant and his most powerful. She only wanted to please him. Her dream was for, when the world was conquered, Ilrian would ask her the question.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 8, 2006 3:09:54 GMT -5
Hmm... I can't but help a little bit of sympathy for her. Still, Tariq's gonna have to kick some butt soon, so... Ah well, doesn't matter. Keep this up Blaze, whenever you please!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2006 11:47:03 GMT -5
i will. hmm i wihs i worte more after all it wa salmost tow week s between that and the previous post.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 8, 2006 14:47:02 GMT -5
Yeah... ... Nah, just kidding again. Carry on whenever you want!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2006 16:46:54 GMT -5
werll there was nayway i will beelive me.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2006 16:16:46 GMT -5
As they entered the shining pass Enigma rose into the air his bat-like wings taking him into the deep purple sky above. He laughed as black fur with a tinge of purple grew over him and he slowly turned wolf-like. “I am free and you are doomed.” He howled as his head turned wolf-like. Tariq responded silently by fusing with Dryden and drawing the blade of the heavens. He rose in the air yelling Tariq’s battle cry. Enigma merley howled again,but this time his howl sent a cold strema of poisonous air at his angelic foe. As it hit Dryden he fell, his hair standing on end and a chill rushing down his spine. His soul forze and his entire body tainted with fear till he could do nothing. Suddenly he fell to his knees as a tremendous shock hit his gut. In Dryden’s moent of weakness Enigma had flown down and launched a powerful kick into the angels stomach. “You have failed Dryden,” He whispered unsheathing his sword and placing it on the angel’s throat “And I have won.” The angel merely pushed the blade away and pulled the demon towards him. “You have never been more wrong,” He hissed punching the demon to the face before he could respond. “This battle is far from over.” With those words he flipped himself up and stood staring at his foe who gradually got up. Enimga wiped the blood off his lip and growled meancingly. “Bad move angel.”
She walked towards the castle villages cowering as she passed. Being the love of the knig was the best thing that ever happened to her. She was like the queen of this city and one day she would be. She could feel it in her heart and soul. As she thought this she felt weak and then everything vanished and it was just her caryrign Serena and…. Tyraniar. “As love grows strong as do I, as Ilrian’s plan succeeds my power grows,” He said. “With Ilrian’s destruction my love shall be released, with his power gone mine shall be released.” With those words the vision vanished and Charinoth was back in Raxor and walking towards the catle. Then she relaised and began to run. “Tyraniar is going to betray Ilrian for his love.” SHe thought. “I must warn Ilrian.” As she ran she took to the air and glided to the castle and to the central tower.
“So Charinoth you have finally returned.” Ilrian siad without averting his gaze from his stone. He turned to his window and saw Charinoth standing there holding Serena. “And you have brought the girl. Good girl.” He walked over and lifted Serena off of Charinoth and onto the floor. As he saw her face pale and weak he slapped Charinoth with the back of his hand. “You were supposed to keep here healthy now she might be useless to me.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 10, 2006 3:38:25 GMT -5
Ouch... Well, that wasn't very nice. 'Course, he seems to have a grudge against the majority of his minions... ... But, it'll bring about his downfall yet!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2006 6:22:17 GMT -5
Hmmm, perhaps it is, but hwo knows.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2006 12:33:27 GMT -5
“But Ilrian I tried, but she would not eat unless I hurt her first.” Charinoth lied “I’m sorry my love.” With those words she changed back into her bird like from and flew into the rafters where she began to cry. Ilrian merely laughed and turned to the girl. He grabbed her by the chin and looked into her eyes.
“She still has her inner strength.” Ilrian whispered. “Perfect, it seems not even Charinoth‘s stupidity could crush her spirit.” He took out his sword and sliced her bonds. Her hands fell out next to her and her legs curved so she looked like a ball. Ilrian laughed as he let out a sharp whistle. A small dog like creature leapt forward. “Assume your true form my servant.” The dog howled and began to grow until it was a wolf. Yet it’s left eye and right side of it’s body were robotic. “You whistled my master.” The wolf like creature howled. Ilrian smirked and told his servant to take the girl away and imprison her in the ‘hospitality suite’. “Make sure she has plenty of food and drink. I need her healthy.” Ilrian ordered. “As you command my master.” The bionic wolf replied dragging the body away with his long tail with a robotic claw on the end holding onto the scruff of Serena’s top. He sblack personed to himself as he dashed across the marble floor with Serena swinging about like a rag doll. What everyone around the castle called the hospitality suite was the darkest, coldest dungeon in the palace.
Ilrian's cold, red eyes turned and focused on his orb. Soon he saw the cold, cruel, spike covered face of his master. The cold green eyes of his master narrowed on him and as he spoke a cold presence seemed to seep through the castle. Colder and crueler then Ilrian could ever produce. “What is it now slave.” Entioch asked in a voice that was barely audible yet every being in the castle heard it and shivered and said the same thing. "Not even Ilrian could be that evil." “I have the girl.” Ilrian replied. “She is in bad condition , but if you hurry she may yet live.” Entioch looked at him with detest then smirked. “I shall be with you shortly servant.”
“I will not tell him about Tyraniar till he apologizes to me.” Charine (Charinoth in her bird form) decided as she sobbed small blood-coloured tears. She felt weary and tired, but anger prevented her from resting. How she hated Ilrian. Yet how she loved him as well. “These feeling will rip me in two.” She screamed. And indeed it was because her soul which was almost completely dark was begriming to split into two parts. One good one evil. Her body would soon follow, but she did not know this all she felt was her heart hurting.
The angel like Tariq just smirked and assumed a fighters stance. He hissed just three words as the demon prepared to attack. “Bring it on.” With those words the demon lunged. The angel didn’t make a move till the demon leapt into the air. “Repulse the demon.” He yelled as he bent backwards and kicked into the air catching the demon in the stomach sending him sprawling to the ground again. “How do you like that demon.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 16, 2006 16:23:26 GMT -5
PUN-ISH-MENT!! PUN-ISH-MENT!! Ah, this story's doing swell. Just so swell! Hmm, what does Entioch want with Serena? What will happen to Charinoth? How will Tariq save the day? And... How come everyone has such strange names in fantasy stories? Stay tuned for more, of THE SPELL OF SHADOWS!!! (Heh heh, commercial hype. Keep this up Blaze, whenever you want!)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2006 6:49:27 GMT -5
i will haunter i will. afterall woudln't want to dissapoint my fans now woudl i.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2006 7:07:28 GMT -5
The demon flipped himself back onto his feet deciding not to lose his temper again in this battle. A difficult feat for a demon who’s blood ran with hatred cuased by two hundred years imprisonment. He swung his sword menacingly and the handle extended till the sword of demons was the halberd of chaos. He dashed along the dirt track halberd poised to strike. The demon was moving with such precision, such grace. Could Tariq manage to dodoge the fatal blow that was about to strike?
Chapter 6: What goes around comes around A flash of icy cold air suddenly rushed through the castle as a dark meancing figure entered through a portal. He looked around with his icy green eyes with disgust. This place was not nearly evil enough for a dark ruler such as he. “Ilrian.” He whispered. As he did Ilrian dahsed in front og him and bowed. Enticoch gave a surprisingly powerful kick (for someone who used blades never hand to hand) to Ilrian’s jaw sending him soaring through the air. “Where is the girl. Speak or die slave.” “She is in the dark dungeon of Carackmor that all call the hospitality suite my master.” Replied Ilrian the coldness in his voice fading as he saw (and felt) his master‘s power. “My foolish second in command did not treat her as well as we might have hoped.” He added strength returning. Entioch let out a menacing growl and shot a ball of pure darkness at Ilrian then dashed forward swiftly and grabbed his slave. “Next time either do it yourself or I will ask my trusted servant to do it for you.” Entioch hissed. “Do you understand Ilrian dunce of darkness, fool of fools, clown of chaos.” Ilrian did not answer. Fear had taken his voice. “I said do you undersntad me slave of shadow.” Ilrian nodded rapidly and slowly rose to his feet. “I understand my master.” He replied. Yet in his mind he thought this. “One dya you will fall by my hand I am no fool, no clown and certainly no dunce. You think your precious prized servant Sackra can beat me. Let him try it.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 17, 2006 7:18:59 GMT -5
Oh, so THAT'S where he gets it from... It's not good to be an evil minion. Anyhow, keep on writing! This story is brilliant... Of course, only if you wanna.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2006 7:35:48 GMT -5
Tyraniar watch these events with great interest. He was especially interested in Entioch’s appearance and the power he controlled. He laughed maniacally. “So that is the famous Entioch. Green eyed and spike covered.” He laughed. “With four swords one for each arm I hid belt and the power to summon dark balls. Heh I would love to see his full power.” He took out on of his own swords to admire it’s edge. This one named Bane of the dragon contained dark and water powers. It was the weapon that had made Tyraniar so powerful. He had searched for it for so long just to defeat Blaze his hated foe.
He had spent five long years in the greatest library in the known universe looking for information on it. From these books he gained wisdom and form practicing the moves he had read about he gained skill. Yet how he was to gain power was yet to come. As he was about to give up his search he found a secret passage in the library leading him to a book resting on a pedestal. “This has to be it.” He whispered. “With this book I will find the Bane of the dragon.” He dashed forward towards it and as he expected there were many traps, but he managed to dodge them with precison and skill beyond his years. Soon he reached to book, but as he touched it energy seemed to flwo through his entire body and words echoed in his mind. “Thou who have found the Book of Banes shall gain power to defeat the lord of all evil and take his place. The sword thou seek is in the hidden depths of the hidden temple.” Tyranair gasped at these words and collapsed. When he awoke he was back in his own home. Could it all have been a dream? No he could feel the power coursing through every fibre of his semi-dragon body. He was ready to find the Bane of the dragon. He immediately prepared to journey to Calimar. The temple that was supposed ot be in the depths of the mighty volcano Noivus. He put on his two swords ,one of earth and one of wind, and set out towards the volcano. Many perils he faced, many foes he defeated, but two years later he was at the gates of Calimar the hidden temple of the anceitn swordians. The door seemed to be sealed yet as he put his hand against it the door swung open. He ran into the temple avoding all the traps e.g arrows, pitfalls, the usual temple traps. Somehow he knew where he was going and soon he reached a great navy blue doorway. As he put his hand against it the door ,again, swung open of it’s own accord. He looked ahead fo him to see a glittering array of water and dark swords, but he only wanted one of them. “Yes the bane of the dragon, the sword I have quested for is MINE.” He yelled his voice strangely cold as he pulled the sword out of the stone. As he didi his scales turned form red to black his horns turned jagged like thunderbolts nd his eeys turned red. He knew then what he must do. He must travel to the mountains of shadow and find the lord of evil. This journey took him only five months, but it seemd like forever before he reached Raxor. He sought an audience with Ilrian and obtained it. At this audience he pledge his entire allegiance to the dark one. “Rise Tyraniar servant of Ilrian. Thou shalt be the greatest asset in my quest of control.”
“That’s what he thought and indeed I was, but now i remember the book’s words.” He thought to himself. “I msut destroy Ilrian and take his place as the lord of evil.” Yet little dii he know that he only sought the puppet when he should have been searching for the master. He knew Entioch ruled over Ilrain, but he did not know that Entioch was the lord of evil and even he, who struck fear into Ilrian's cold heart, had a master both cold and curel. So dark it would cause you nightmares for seven years just to look upon his face. He was the true evil. The one who had conquered the shadow mountains and much of the surrounding territory. Entioch had forgotten all about him, but from his dark tower this ultimate evil was still watching and waiting to strike.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 17, 2006 8:31:34 GMT -5
Sounds a nasty piece of work... Hmm, Serena hasn't really had any main moments for a while. Then again, when you've been kidnapped by evil forces, there's not much to do... Well, keep writing! This is great....
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