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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 11, 2006 17:24:40 GMT -5
Uh oh... *Rushes behind high-security walls, as do cheerleaders* *Throws cheerleaders out* There's only room for me... MEEEEEEE!!! Well, keep writing, 'cos this stuff's cool! Of course, only if you feel like it...  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2006 12:30:00 GMT -5
i always do and ehr's an update. oh chapter fives going to begin soon.
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“If Enigma fails my plan will be ruined.” Ilrian whispered then he shouted “Carnor, Ram, Anope step forward.” Two werewolves stepped forward one with auburn fur and the other with gray closely followed by a Roc.
“Yes master.” They all stated bowing low. The lord of evil instructed them in his own tongue ,which is so foul I cannot repeat it, to help Enigma destroy Dryden by any means necessary. They bowed and the two werewolves jumped onto Anope’s back and flew towards the town of Zarnor at a speed even Charine would be proud of.
“Move it girl,” The demoness said viciously kicking her prisoner. “I want too get to the Shadow Mountains this year.” Serena stumbled to the floor her body weak with pain and heartache. “I said move now MOVE.” The demoness pulled her up to her feet and whipped her. Serena limped slowly forward her hands tied behind her back and her mouth gagged. She was tired weary and in pain and desperately needed rest.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 12, 2006 13:56:32 GMT -5
Ooh, that demoness is a NASTY piece of work...  Well, keep on writing! |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2006 17:10:59 GMT -5
Yeah charinoth is really mean. well most demons are. Yet you will see soon that they ar entohing comapred to..... oops almost revleaed a secret
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 12, 2006 17:19:20 GMT -5
Uh oh! Sounds bad... Yet, awesome!  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2006 17:46:31 GMT -5
hehe you will see. oh by the way don't expect nay update sover the wekekend. i'm going ot ym mum's and i don't jsut update online i have to keep my word document version up to scratch too. SO NO WORK THIS WEEKEND. except perhaps sunday.
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She needed sustenance as well. She felt like she would die without water soon.
The battle waged between the two warriors from the spectral realms of heaven and hell. No-one seemed to be able to hit the other and it seemed that the battle would be won by who tired first. The people watching were cheering the angle on silently. Yet they all knew that the demon would never give up and neither would the angle. This battle would indeed be a battle won by who had the more stamina. Sweat poured down their faces as their swords clashed and energy radiated form their bodies.
“Give in angel you stand no chance against me.” The demon hissed.
In the caverns Tyraniar meditated his thoughts on Blaze and nothing else. Spikes extended from his body and fire surrounded him. Croytak watched from his cage he stared at the stone of earth and began to use it’s powers. He watched the battle and then saw the evil threesome coming from the mountains of shadow. He didn’t know what to do. He focused on the stone with all his mind trying to find Sephyr. She was the only one who could help Dryden.
Groksh stomped around the forest bored by this inactivity. He had expected a fight long before this. He did not know what was happening around the world for his master had not informed him. He stared into his own stone and focused on his masters orb. A cold cruel voice echoed towards Groksh loudly as he asked why nothing had happened.
“You dare question my plans ape perhaps you are not as smart as I thought.” The evil ones face focused in contorted fury on his orb.
“Master please don’t ARGGGH” Yelled Groksh as his brain began to swell.
“ I do not tolerate people questioning me for that you shall die painfully.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 13, 2006 2:38:53 GMT -5
Hmm, y'know, that guy seems to be killing more of his own minions than other people. You'd have thought that massive monsters of evil would be hard to come by... Just a thought, how's this guy gonna cope when he's killed all but two minions. Then what? Then he's in for it. Nah, just a comical thought. Keep writing when you want to, okay? |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2006 11:28:59 GMT -5
He is ruthless and a m.... oh man almsot revleaed the biggest secret. And who says they arre nt mad eby something heh.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2006 15:11:16 GMT -5
Chapter 5: The battle against darkness rages on
The two ethereal beings battle could be heard from miles around. As their swords clashed a blinding flash was let out. Yet they kept fighting the light not affecting them at all. They were in a battle for vengeance against each other. It seemed it would go on forever. Well it did seem like it would till….
“STOP you should not be fighting one another.” A voice called. Both of them looked down to see none other then Tariq. “You are me and I am you we must unite under the same goal. To unify the world.” Both of the beings growled.
“Never will I join forces with this angel.”
“Neither will I with this demon.” Tariq stared at them both and swung his sword cutting them both. “You have no choice I hold the two stones you ar just projections of them.” With these words he pulled out the stones. “Anceint beings of light and shadow I hold thy precious stones unite under me until I decide to set thou free.” Both of them screamed as they were sucked into Tariq. As they were combined iwht him four wings sprouted from his back, two demonic and two angelic, His eyes turned to a colorless grey and half his body became demonic and the other side angelic.
“I am finally ready to save Croytak.” The combined being stated. His tummy grumbled. “Once I have got some food that is. He looked round and saw the destruction “And rebuilt thy fair city good people of Zarnor.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 17, 2006 16:58:20 GMT -5
Heh, go Tariq! I found that sorta funny. Erm, I think it's safe now... *Emerges from high-security walls* *Yelps and is attacked by the cheerleaders* Oww... |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 18, 2006 15:56:08 GMT -5
Hmmm lucky you as lonfg as they are fmeal otheriwse i'd be scared for your saftey and #D-ness. heh ya might get squashed.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 18, 2006 16:43:54 GMT -5
Yeah, what would I do without my #D-ness... Wait a sec! What is a #D-ness?!! Besides, you thought I was lucky? I forgot to mention... THEY HAD FREAKIN' SWORDS!!!!  I'm not half the man I used to be...  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2006 12:13:39 GMT -5
Ouch that bad man
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2006 20:11:24 GMT -5
Better than most of the junk I've seen...
But, grammar, paragraphing, and formatting seem to give you the most trouble, I see few spelling mistakes.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Jan 21, 2006 5:44:28 GMT -5
I think it's a great story anyway! I mean, you've tried hard on this story, and I salute that! And it's still going, which is brilliant. Go 'Spell of Shadows' story! |
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