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Post by FlameMaster5 on Dec 21, 2005 16:11:06 GMT -5
Your welcome, Blaze. ^_^ Just do your best, that's what I do. You need inspiration, I need motivation. That was a good way to motivate me. ^_~ I appreciate it. And I will restore what I have lost - I promise. Blaze, just follow your dreams. Let them take you wherever you wish to go. That's all I've ever done, creating a vivid imagination. So, may determination guide you.  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 21, 2005 16:12:58 GMT -5
yes let it guide us both to finishing our great stories and publishing them one day. let determination hope and iamgination fill us all and drive us forward.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Dec 21, 2005 18:27:08 GMT -5
Yeah! Wow, this story has seriously gotten even better! Wow! The writing style, it's... Excellent. Blaze, my friend, you have improved beyond what I'd ever expect. And that's good. Keep on keep on keep on keep on writing!  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 22, 2005 7:00:53 GMT -5
i iwll beleive me.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2005 10:02:33 GMT -5
and i will now.
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He quickly broke camp, got dressed and began to climb Ching. Each second seemed to last an eternity. Sweat pouring down his face eyes burning with the light of determination almost sparking out of his pale green eyes, his hair blowing in the wind he climbed the crumbling walls to where the Shining Stone lied. Little did he know that Charinoth touching it had infected it and if he did not hurry and get there it would be unusable by anything except a shadow being like Tyraniar.
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The mighty were-dragon Tyraniar watched with almost happiness as he saw the Shining stone become darker every minute. HE laughed malevolently more evilly then even Ilrian could manage. So maniacally that all plant life in his lair withered and died.
“My master he is climbing for the stone.” Tyraniar whispered into his Sacred Stone.
“THEN STOP HIM FOOL.” Came the cold cruel voice of his master.
“But master the stone is becoming the legendary Shadow Orb.” Tyraniar replied with an all knowing air to his voice. He saw his masters anger turn to malevolent happiness and smirked. His masters face faded with words telling him to watch Tariq like a goshawk searching for it’s prey. Tyraniar turned his focus back to Tariq yet on his mind in the very deep reaches of his cerebrum his thoughts were on his foe Blaze.
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Dec 23, 2005 10:21:06 GMT -5
I see you used my tip. ^_^ Now it looks even better and much easier to read. Very good, Blaze. You catch on quick - with techniques and writing itself.  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2005 11:06:14 GMT -5
yay glad ya like ti fm5.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2005 8:52:07 GMT -5
coz here's an update
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All of this went unbeknownst to the hero climbing the mountain. He was only a quarter of the way up and already four hours had passed. If he did not hurry, though he did not know it, the stone would corrupt him and turn him into something dark. Yet his anger, his hatred, his never ceasing thirst for vengeance was making him increase in speed. Yet even with such velocity it might not be enough.
All over the world Master’s as wise and as powerful as Croytak were watching and praying. Yet none watched closer or hoped more then Sephyr of the Arachnorie. She was watching yet not standing still she was preparing to leave for Mt. Ching immediately. She grabbed her spear and shield both made of reinforced steel. The shield square, the spear sharpened and her winged pegasi ready she set off for Ching hoping that hse would nto be too late.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Dec 24, 2005 12:37:50 GMT -5
This is exciting! Cool story, can't wait for more... |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2005 13:18:35 GMT -5
well hopefully there won't be too lnog to wiat. i thinknig of updating tommororw so keepp your eyes open.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 26, 2005 6:19:38 GMT -5
As she rode across the pale blue skies she hoped and prayed that he woudl reahc the stone before it became the Shadow Orb. She kicked her heels into the side of her pegasi and it galloped off acrross the sky at maximum speed. Soon she saw the Silver Mountains ahead of her yet she still could be too late.
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TAriq rested on a small ledge prtruding from the moutain side weary yet stiill determined. After his ten minute rest he began to climb again with renewed stamina and speed. Yet as he got higher he found that hand and foot holds were harder to find.
"If i had wings this would be much easier."he thought as he struggled to find a foothold. YEt he kept going determined to reach the stone nto knowing that if he did not reach it in the next hour then he would not be able ot touch it.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Dec 26, 2005 15:51:59 GMT -5
Cool! Keep on writing, I enjoy reading! |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 26, 2005 15:57:44 GMT -5
i will asap. i am going ot begin a seocnd one as well my dad's idea actually.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Dec 26, 2005 17:17:11 GMT -5
Cool! That'll be good... Looking forwards to it! |
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Dec 26, 2005 21:07:02 GMT -5
Very good! ^_^ Great detail! Keep it up! |
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