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Post by Haunter 360 on Nov 16, 2005 2:16:52 GMT -5
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Nov 16, 2005 10:51:12 GMT -5
I suppose Serena has a thing for younger guys, huh? XD Lol, I think it's a great story though! ^_^ When you wish, Blaze, continue forward. I'm glad I gave you that title - you deserved it.  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2005 12:31:35 GMT -5
hehe yeah i gues sbut i think this will proably in my opinon be the first time she flet like this. so who knows and i will continue now.
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Tariq walked forward Serena clenching his hand tightly her soft tendril fingers wrapped around his. They move forward as quietly as possible and everything echoed even their breath. They both believed the place strangely eerie and with each step their fear grew. Though they did not know it this was Agroith’s power to create fear that strikes the hearts of men. Agroith's power was being focused through the sacred gem of earth and all it's power was focused on those two.
"They will never defeat me, but i must do it otherwise my master will destroy me.” He whispered in fear of his master. His power was growing trough the sacred gem of earth.
Groksh defender of the sacred gem of forests was alone except for his minion and son Krosh.
"Krosh go and tell my minions to guard every entrance to my forest." Groksh commanded. Krosh nodded and swung away on vine to where the minions waited.
Ilrian watched cackling maniacally. All was going to his plan and as long as Agroith didn’t fail him then soon the white castle would become black.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Nov 16, 2005 16:22:56 GMT -5
Weeheeheeheeeee... Erm, I mean, please continue... |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2005 16:09:19 GMT -5
In the far distance where Tariq walked through the dark caverns with Serena by his side a message was heard by the hero. It echoed in his mind and at first he did not understand it.
Then he did “Tariq I am Croytak master of combat listen to me, a dragon hath captured me and I will not be alive much longer so I must tell you this…” It stated.
Tariq froze in his tracks and Serena almost stumbled in surprise. She waved her hand in front of his face. Nothing happened. He was in a trance.
“Tariq you art the great hero, you must train before coming to face the dragon go and find the Shining stone on top of Mt. ching highest of the silver mountains. Then it will give you new powers and make you wise like it did onto me. Only then can you beat Agroith.”
Tariq blinked and saw Serena standing confused in front of him. He grinned.
“We must go to Mt. Ching and find the shining stone.” he stated pulling her close and placing a kiss on her lips and embraced her in a hug before beginning to go to the entrance to the caves and back to the Shining Pass of the Silver Mountains.”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Nov 28, 2005 14:12:15 GMT -5
Ooh, cool! I wanna read more!  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2005 14:28:20 GMT -5
well i getitign dere haunter i wnat to try and do a big post for ym next one. hehe it's gonig to be important. especially as part 4 about to begin.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Nov 28, 2005 16:33:45 GMT -5
PART 4?!!  Already?! Wow! Doesn't time fly...?  I'm going to enjoy this next part... |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2005 11:36:10 GMT -5
hopefully. it will be enjoyable to write as hopefully it will be to read.
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Chapter 4: Power is not everything
She smiled sweetly and placed her hand in his and he wrapped his around it. They walked off towards the entrance hand in hand. They soon saw the light of the entrance ahead of them. They both though this rather strange because it had taken far longer to get in. Yet they both said nothing and kept going. As they got outside they realized it was noon as the light was directly on them and it nearly blinded them both. They both shielded their eyes with their free hand and then they ran over to Quicksilver. Tariq let go of her hand swinging onto the horse and then pulled her up behind him. He smiled as he kicked Quicksilver’s sides gently.
“To Mt Ching Quickbolt and show us the true meaning of speed.” He whispered into the horse’s ear gently. Quickbolt rose up on his hind legs and went into a gallop going straight for the high mountain of Ching at maximum speed.
Yet on Ching’s opposite in the fortress of Raxor the dark Ilrian watched all this with his glowing eyes in wonder.
“What is he doing.” He asked no-one in particular. He turned black cape swaying and focused his eyes on one of his minions in particular. It was focused on a small black phoenix.
“Charine fly to the Shining pass and find out what our friend the one called Tariq is doing if you fail I will have a very rare delicacy for dinner now GO.” he shouted the last word bellowed so loudly that it blew the phoenix into the air. The phoenix turned and flapped it’s wings as it soared into the shadowy sky.
The dark being then changed his glare back to the orb of Cayrn. He cackled maniacally. He focused his gaze and soon he saw his forest minion Groksh.
“Is everything going according to plan my servant.” He asked.
Focusing onto his sacred stone of forests Groksh saw his master. He had heard the message and immediately began to work his minuscule brain to see his master and reply.
“All goes well the forest grows in size and begins to spread your evil.” He replied. He heard a maniacal laugh of pure malevolence. Then the face disappeared and the emerald went blank.
In Raxor the mighty Ilrian’s focused back on Tariq the hero and his what Ilrian believed to be Tariq’s girlfriend. He laughed as he saw a black speck in the sky above them. Charine was quick getting their, but it was slow for her.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Nov 29, 2005 16:15:39 GMT -5
Cool... Wanna see what happens next! |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2005 16:36:41 GMT -5
hehe yay glad ya like it hmmmm. updates have got to be mroe frequent for mine me thinks. hmmmmmmmm
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Post by FlameMaster5 on Dec 3, 2005 2:40:11 GMT -5
Sorry I haven't been here in awhile.  Yet, I did read everything I missed! ^_^ Very good, Blaze. I think you're grasping this writing thing very well. Remind me every once in awhile to come back in case I get caught up in things again. *sigh* Life is stressful... |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2005 8:46:30 GMT -5
i knowit is but rembertheholidaysarealmosthere and a new addition to ths storyisalready
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CHarine staredatteherears and eyesfarbetter then any mortal creature.sh heardthewordsmt hing and shinng stone. As an aura surrounded her she brgan to change her wings turned into slender female arms and her birdslegsinto humas.hrhadalso trasfromed nto that of a beautiful entrapment demon. A fire burnedin hershoulders and shegrasped themn pai. SUddnely fourhuge bat like wings erupted.
Shepuleedoutastone formherpocket foraminskrthadapeared aroun her legs and and sleevless top overher body. SHe was now in her form known as Charinoth. She smirked and rubbed the stone he rmaster's face appearing on it wearing a smirk of pure malevolence.
"You have new for me Charinoth?" the cold voice fo her master asked.
"Yes my master theyheadto Mt ching to find the shining stone." Sherpelied. Then shecowered as her master'sfacecontorted with fury. then she heard tow wors shoutedin angerthat ecoed aorun herhead. STOP THEM was what she heard. She nodded and placed the stone in her pocket. She turnedehrhead towards the hgih peak of Mt ching and shot off like an arrow towards it.
Back in Raxor on the oppsite side of Thiragea afuiousIlrian wasdestroyingostof his minons in anger. SUddnely his glare turned to his crystal and he soon saw Agroith.
"YOU HAVE FAILED ME"he yelled.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Dec 4, 2005 12:21:48 GMT -5
Yikes! I wouldn't switch places with that dragon/serpent minion, no way never! Well, maybe in certain circumstances, but... Boy, it's pretty tough to be a minion, eh?  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2005 12:33:49 GMT -5
yeah especially fora tyrt fo pure amlevolencecorrupted by.........oops enalry revealeda secret hehe.
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