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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2006 8:39:16 GMT -5
Yep afterall she has been kidanpped. soon hopefully i will do a greta battle scene again .ro amybe an escape scene.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 17, 2006 10:12:41 GMT -5
Either one sounds great!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2006 15:08:05 GMT -5
heh beelive me it will be. it will be. i promise you that. man i hoep i cna keep that promise
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2006 7:26:11 GMT -5
Serena slowly opened her eyes, but she saw no more light then when they were closed. The room she was in was pitch black, cold and wet. All she rembered was being knocked over by that woman when they came into range of some dark ominous looking mountains. Then her mind was blank till she woke up in the dungeon. She looked around her pale green eyes trying to adjust to the darkness. After the initial shock of being in this foul place she realized her head was sore and she rubbed it gently. After that she noticed the foul smell that floated around the room. The fould smell of rotting flesh. Suddenly she heard the sound of a door creaking open and light flooded through the darkness almost blinding her. She blinked and saw a figure coated in armour covered with spikes and glowing green eyes. He looked around the room and then chucked someone forward. “I think you will enjoy some company.” Entioch whispered shackling the person to the wall. “This is punishment for your treacherous thoughts. You will lay here for 80 days Ilrian.” With that he walked out of the room and slammed the door behind him. All of the light was gone except that of Ilrian’s two glowing red eyes. “Who are you and where am I.” She asked. “Please tell me sir.” The eyes turned to her she could she no fire of jsutice in them only the cold, despairing look of evil. “I am Ilrian and you are in MY castle.” He replied putting great emphasis on the word my and actually shouted it.
Tariq stared at his foe as they circled each other weapons poised. That last attack had taken a lot of energy from both of them, but still they fought. Suddenly they dashed into each other and the sound of reverberating metal echoed around the valley. Tariq stared into the demon’s eyes with anger. “You made a mistaek by betraying my trust Enigma.” He whispered as they broke apart and tried to stab each other again. The demon merely laughed malevolently as he hissed his reply. “No angelic being fused with mortals,” He replied. “You have made the mistake by trying to defeat me. I am unbeatable.” Once again their two weapons clashed and as they did they were both thrown backwards by the force of it. Yet neither hit the gorund for as they flew backwards the took to the air and continued their battle in the skies. Tariq was silent now as he fought against his first foe. He had to concentrate for if he lost then all would be lost and darkness would reign supreme. “Light will suceed demon.” He yelled. “Not if I have anything to say about it.” The demon replied.
Tyraniar paced about his room trying to think of a cunning plan to kill his former master. He had served Ilrian long enough. Now was his time. Or so he thought. Yet was it truly his time to shine as the lord of shadow? “I must be clever about this.” He whispered. “There must be a way to do it, but how?”
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 19, 2006 15:36:19 GMT -5
Serves Ilrian right, killing all those henchmen... Anyhow, this is getting good! Please don't stop now... Well, unless you want to, that is.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 19, 2006 15:45:00 GMT -5
of course i don't oh by the wya there hsoudl be about 4 updates next week. at the LEAST. hoepfully ther will be more. Heh look at the tile of the chapter. What gos aorudn comes around.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2006 16:31:53 GMT -5
As the two mighty warriors weapons met again the sound of clashing metal echoed around the pass. Neither warrior was going to let up and both knew they had to kill the other to proceed in their own missions. They broke apart and floated there catching their breath. This battle would never end. “Demon you will not last the night for wherever there is darkness lightt will shien through.” He whispered. “I am the beacon of hope to all of those people in Zarnor and I WILL suceed.” The demon laughed at him his cold red eyes showing malicious fury beyond that of any man or warrior on this planet. “Fool I am the bane of all light. I was born of shadows and where there is shadows so am I.” With that he vanished and suddenly Angelic Tariq felt osmoen punch him in the back of the head. He turned, but no-one was there. The suddenly there was and he ahd swung an almighty kick at his face. “How did you do that.” Tariq panted wiping the blood from his lip.How had he doen that? Suddenly he was in one place then he was in another. There was nothing he could do against such rapid speed. Unless he could get him into where there was light. That was it he would have to run. He did not want to, but it was the only thing he could do.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Feb 23, 2006 16:39:04 GMT -5
Go for it Tariq! Show that demon who's da boss!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2006 12:07:37 GMT -5
yep soz ther enot been a lot this week. won't eb one till sundya. i know is aid four, but hopefuloy this will make up for 3 ok.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2006 14:18:53 GMT -5
He flew swiftly and then he saw something that amazed him. A city in the mountains still covered with light. More light then the sun could give. He flew straight towards it at maximum velocity. “I msut reach that city it seemd God has chosen it to save me.” In every place in the world darkness was spreading. Only the white castle and a few other places that fought against the darkness were left. This was all due to Entioch’s wicked plan. Since had stepped into this world he ahd created more warriors then you could could count. All had been ordered to wipe out light forever. Unfortunately for the light the soldiers were succeeding in their dark ways. “Soon MY spell of shadows will be woven and all shall obey me.” Enticoch laughed sadistically. “Soon Ilrian’s paln to turn white to black will be complete by my will.” Witht hat he stomped down and crated himself another 4 servants. “Shadow Warriors go and help the demon Enigma.” He told them. They ndded and each transformed into a fierce flying beast and took off in the dircetion of Zarackmor the last stronghold of the mountains once called silver.
Serena look at Ilrian wondering why he seemed so vile when his brother was so sweet. She had to know the answer. “Ilrian how did you become dark.”she asked curiously.
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Post by Haunter 360 on Mar 1, 2006 15:19:35 GMT -5
"Well... I passed my dark graduation!" PASS YOUR DARK GRADUATIONS, TODAY.Heh, just joking. It's probably a bit more dark than that... Sorry, a LOT darker than that. Keep writing when you can and want to Blaze!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2006 15:35:52 GMT -5
beleive me it is. ------------------------- Ilrian’s glaring red orbs turned to her. He spat on the gorund and told her to mnid her own business. It was a subject he found painful to talk about. “Come on Ilrian.” HSe whispered gently slowly moving towards him. “Tell me please.” she added in a very child like way. “If it will make you leave me alone.” She nodded vigorously. “Well it began when my borhter Tariq was about 6 I think………”
It was all going well for us I was 16 and was already a top ranknig army officer. It all seemed perfect until I got the messgae that we were to march on the dreaded Shadow Mountains. I siad goodbye to my family and promised to be back soon. It was a promise that I would not keep. As soon as I reached the mountains I knew my life was about to change forever and indeed it did. As I entered the pass with my troop behind me we wer attacke dby savage shadow creatures with glowing purple eyes. They fired beams of dark enrgy at us which killed most on the first hit, but I survived though sheere willpower to return to my family. As I sliced one of them with my sword another hit me from behind and I was knocked senseless. When I awoke I was in a dungeon, no, a torture chamber and in front of me was a man, nay, a demon with glowing green eyes and covered in spikes. He stared at me with malice as he ordered one of his minions to tighten the ropes that bound me to rack. I did not let him have the pleasure of hearing me scream. Because of this they tightened it again yet still I did not scream. The being laughed a cold cruel laugh before speaking in a voice that chilled the very soul and made ones blood run cold. “Now I see how you beat my soldiers.” He whispered. “You will make a great new apprentice for me.” I stared at him with the light of honour still burning in my eyes and spat at him before speaking “I will never be your apprentice.” I screamed as I pulled against the rack to try and grab him. I had never been more wrong and I somehow knew that my hope was merly fool’s hope, but I would not succumb to despair. He laughed cruelly and tightened the rack himself causing great pain on my legs and arms. I wanted to scream, but would not show him he was getting to me. “You have great willpower, but that can soon be broken.” He mocked. “All succumb to my will or die trying to refuse it.” He did not say this like he was bragging nor like he was cared he merely said it in his cruel rasping voice. “You will not have the pleasure of seeing me on your side foul tyrant.” I hissed in reply. “No matter how many have doen your bidding ro died tyring to stop you using them. I will NOT join you. I will die first” -------------------------- it will eb a lot longer
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Post by Haunter 360 on Mar 2, 2006 2:34:38 GMT -5
Aww... Poor Ilrian... Hm, no wonder he kills so many minions. An old grudge! Well, keep writing when ya wanna!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2006 11:10:30 GMT -5
heh hoepfulyl ASAP if fate holds ture. hmmmm i wonder has naylone used hte name fear for a charcter?
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Post by Haunter 360 on Mar 2, 2006 14:56:12 GMT -5
Probably someone, somehwere, has... But, not recent, not that I know. Heh, I haven't!
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